Truth
20 syllable poem28 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, Truth, has the proper syllable count and reminds the readers that everything we hear and see does not always sound or look right. Experience and perseverance will be needed.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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This twenty-syllable poem, Truth, has the proper syllable count and reminds the readers that everything we hear and see does not always sound or look right. Experience and perseverance will be needed.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hello Bill. Thanks so very much! These short ones are challenging, but fun too!!
Melissa
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Another good one sugarray. Twenty meaningfull syllables in this poem. As I read it I was thinking of the silencing of the mind during meditation. A great poetic start to 2024 for you.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Another good one sugarray. Twenty meaningfull syllables in this poem. As I read it I was thinking of the silencing of the mind during meditation. A great poetic start to 2024 for you.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hello Pearl. Thanks so very much! These short ones are challenging, but fun too!!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever post as we are often wounded by the truth when it is discovered. A talented post from a talented pen, much enjoyed Melissa, love Dolly x x x
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This is a clever post as we are often wounded by the truth when it is discovered. A talented post from a talented pen, much enjoyed Melissa, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hello Dolly. Thanks so very much! These short ones are challenging, but fun too!!
Melissa
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Sugarray, you're doing so well with your writing. In 20 syllables, you have written a thought-provoking poem. I especially liked:
truths that
have to be felt
not heard
(I like that. The above is so true, and sometimes the truth stings.)
Great photo. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. Margaret
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hi Sugarray, you're doing so well with your writing. In 20 syllables, you have written a thought-provoking poem. I especially liked:
truths that
have to be felt
not heard
(I like that. The above is so true, and sometimes the truth stings.)
Great photo. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. Margaret
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hello Margaret. Thanks so very much! These short ones are challenging, but fun too!!
Melissa
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beautifully written it's like I read a poem across the time full of mystery:"he discovered
secrets on the
edge of silence...
truths that
have to be felt
not heard", thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Beautifully written it's like I read a poem across the time full of mystery:"he discovered
secrets on the
edge of silence...
truths that
have to be felt
not heard", thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hello Iza. Thanks so very much! These short ones are challenging, but fun too!!
Melissa
Comment from Navada
Sometimes we are unable to feel those secrets in the midst of the noise and it requires silence for them to present themselves. Lovely writing - all the best for the contest! :)
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Sometimes we are unable to feel those secrets in the midst of the noise and it requires silence for them to present themselves. Lovely writing - all the best for the contest! :)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hello Navada. Thanks so very much! These short ones are challenging, but fun too!!
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You have spoken of truth, the kind that can only be felt. Do you mean some truth can only be learnt via experience than words. I guess the experience gives one deeper understanding of the truth. I like this thought provoking poem.
Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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You have spoken of truth, the kind that can only be felt. Do you mean some truth can only be learnt via experience than words. I guess the experience gives one deeper understanding of the truth. I like this thought provoking poem.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Hello Lisa. Thanks so very much! These short ones are challenging, but fun too!!
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Another beautifully written poem. Lovely overall presentation background colour and font choice. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Another beautifully written poem. Lovely overall presentation background colour and font choice. Beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much, Joanne. Glad you enjoyed it.
Melissa
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Your welcome