Within My World
A little about me42 total reviews
Comment from Yusita
This was a very lovely poem with great meter which let us know a little more about you! I always enjoy reading your poems, and it was nice to read one about you, this time!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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This was a very lovely poem with great meter which let us know a little more about you! I always enjoy reading your poems, and it was nice to read one about you, this time!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Beautiful rhyming scheme on a beautiful poem and it's nice to see something of yourself here for sure and thank you for sharing not always easy to do. I wonderful poem written by a talented hand gorgeous script and a dark backdrop to set off your text find choice in picture you got a beautiful piece of work here and there's only one thing that can be done about it! Best of luck to you I hope you have the best day as this is a grammatically perfect!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Beautiful rhyming scheme on a beautiful poem and it's nice to see something of yourself here for sure and thank you for sharing not always easy to do. I wonderful poem written by a talented hand gorgeous script and a dark backdrop to set off your text find choice in picture you got a beautiful piece of work here and there's only one thing that can be done about it! Best of luck to you I hope you have the best day as this is a grammatically perfect!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Lea, I cannot thank you enough for such a lovely review and beautiful words. I am truly honored by them, as well as your six stars. You are such a special and beautiful woman (I've been meaning to tell you that for a while) and I appreciate you so very much. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
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Thank you so much that's very kind of you I hope your day is going well!
Comment from nomi338
Within the world that we the authors of Fanstory have helped to create, there is no hate, no bullying. There is for the most part fidelity, brotherhood, creative license, and the freedom of expression. When an interloper tries to come in and poison the atmosphere, he is quickly routed and sent packing. We are also good at policing what we tenderly and lovingly call our home. I love you sis, and I am so proud of you, your skill as a writer, you love and compassion for all of your brothers and sisters here. I could not be prouder, even if I tried.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Within the world that we the authors of Fanstory have helped to create, there is no hate, no bullying. There is for the most part fidelity, brotherhood, creative license, and the freedom of expression. When an interloper tries to come in and poison the atmosphere, he is quickly routed and sent packing. We are also good at policing what we tenderly and lovingly call our home. I love you sis, and I am so proud of you, your skill as a writer, you love and compassion for all of your brothers and sisters here. I could not be prouder, even if I tried.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Nomi, you just have me smiling from one ear to the next. Just when I think you can't get any sweeter, you say something like all the lovely things in this review. You are so very special and I cannot tell you how much you mean to me too. Thanks so very much, my very awesome BBB. Love ya, Debi
Comment from Sabrina H.
I seem to come across your poems more than anyone else's. This lates poem is simple beautiful. The picture you used is stunning. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I seem to come across your poems more than anyone else's. This lates poem is simple beautiful. The picture you used is stunning. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem.
Comment from karenina
Very nice. Totally expect great rhyme and meter from you and you did not disappoint!
Sometimes it is the most loving thing to do for your FS friends, to share about yourself!
You make me smile, Debi...
With these priorities and your strategy by faith you are a six star human/angel!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Very nice. Totally expect great rhyme and meter from you and you did not disappoint!
Sometimes it is the most loving thing to do for your FS friends, to share about yourself!
You make me smile, Debi...
With these priorities and your strategy by faith you are a six star human/angel!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Hey Sweet Pea, I want to thank you for the lovely review and words for my world poem. I appreciate it so very much. Love, Debi
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Welcome!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed learning more about you. I knew about your lupus condition because you told me. We are both lucky to have beautiful families. It sounds like your faith is very important to you. It must be of great support for you while facing life's ups and downs. I love the presentation. :)
Good luck!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed learning more about you. I knew about your lupus condition because you told me. We are both lucky to have beautiful families. It sounds like your faith is very important to you. It must be of great support for you while facing life's ups and downs. I love the presentation. :)
Good luck!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Hi Gypsy, I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem.
Comment from jmdg1954
To quote a fabulous poet-
It's pretty general but it's my world.
General, schmeneral... you got it all, Debi. You will kick doofus's lupus's ass! You have your husband, kids and grandkids and our extended family here at FanStory in your corner.
To quote myself...
Babe, you got this!
John
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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To quote a fabulous poet-
It's pretty general but it's my world.
General, schmeneral... you got it all, Debi. You will kick doofus's lupus's ass! You have your husband, kids and grandkids and our extended family here at FanStory in your corner.
To quote myself...
Babe, you got this!
John
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Hi John, I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem. You truly made my whole week week w your sweet comments! You do know you?re the best! Right? LOL!
Comment from Navada
Thank you so much, Debi - it's nice to learn more about you and what makes you tick! I'm sorry to hear you're dealing with lupus, but delighted to hear more about your family and your faith to add to the snippets revealed in earlier poems. Thanks so much for sharing this! :)
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Debi - it's nice to learn more about you and what makes you tick! I'm sorry to hear you're dealing with lupus, but delighted to hear more about your family and your faith to add to the snippets revealed in earlier poems. Thanks so much for sharing this! :)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Nevada, I thank you very much for such a kind and thoughtful review and comments for My World poem.
Comment from Teri7
Debi, this is a very lovely and well written poem about you! You used very good descriptive words, and I can totally relate to having a disease that tries to keep us from being ourselves, but we can be ourselves and enjoy our life in Christ. Beautiful imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Debi, this is a very lovely and well written poem about you! You used very good descriptive words, and I can totally relate to having a disease that tries to keep us from being ourselves, but we can be ourselves and enjoy our life in Christ. Beautiful imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Teri, I have fallen a little behind again, but I always try to catch up as I do appreciate every review that comes my way. So thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my World poem, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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You are so welcome. Please forgive me for not writing a birthday poem yet for Keat. We just had a large amount of snow for us. It's kind of crazy here. love and blessings, Teri
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LOL, that poem for Keats that I wrote was actually in October. I have some things written ahead of time, so his birthday was long gone anyway by the time I shared this poem. He just called on FaceTime and said he had sprained his ankle today. And mom is in Jamaica on business. So it is him and dad for another week but dad will have to miss a few days of work.
Thanks so much for thinking of him tho. He will be going back into Children's hospital in Minneapolis again for testing soon. I will let you know how he is doing. We just want to see him grow and have the chance to be a man someday.
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Thank you for letting me know. Dear Heavenly Father please give Keats a healing touch. Let his little body line up with the word of God and let all the tests come out good and help him to grow into a great little boy that You can use for Your glory dear God. I ask in the mighty and powerful name of Jesus Christ. amen
I love you dear friend, but God loves you so much more!!!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The rhyming of your poem. Your style of writing is great. Sometimes when we write fancy the writing is difficult to read. This poem explains so many different phases in your life. God Bless You.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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The rhyming of your poem. Your style of writing is great. Sometimes when we write fancy the writing is difficult to read. This poem explains so many different phases in your life. God Bless You.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
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Hi Rosemary, I have fallen a little behind again, but I always try to catch up as I do appreciate every review that comes my way. So thank you so very much for your lovely comments for my World poem, my dear friend. Love, Debi