Morning Skies
Gratitude31 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
The beauty of morning skies. I love to take pictures of rising and setting skies to place and share in a Verse of the Day message on my Facebook page. Unfortunately since I'm disabled and have a hard time moving around I've been unable to do so. Thank you for Sharing your Thoughts and accompanying Verses with your Poem. Blessings to you and yours.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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The beauty of morning skies. I love to take pictures of rising and setting skies to place and share in a Verse of the Day message on my Facebook page. Unfortunately since I'm disabled and have a hard time moving around I've been unable to do so. Thank you for Sharing your Thoughts and accompanying Verses with your Poem. Blessings to you and yours.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you for this thoughtful and encouraging review. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from RodG
Janet, I truly enjoyed reading this poem about the joys of a beautiful sunrise. I especially like your simile here: Then miles of pink and blue/like floating ribbons soft as silk. One line's meter falters, however: The unknown lies in each dawn.
You're short a syllable. May I suggest The unknown lies in each HUED dawn.
Rod
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Janet, I truly enjoyed reading this poem about the joys of a beautiful sunrise. I especially like your simile here: Then miles of pink and blue/like floating ribbons soft as silk. One line's meter falters, however: The unknown lies in each dawn.
You're short a syllable. May I suggest The unknown lies in each HUED dawn.
Rod
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Thank you Rod for this wonderful review. Wow! I missed that one. Thank you - I will immediately make the change
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome. Also, a good fix to that line.
Comment from Ulla
Absolutely, Janet. I couldn't agree more. I find that peace and beauty in the nature that surrounds. That gives me all.the peace I could long for. I loved your poem. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Absolutely, Janet. I couldn't agree more. I find that peace and beauty in the nature that surrounds. That gives me all.the peace I could long for. I loved your poem. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Ulla for this thoughtful and encouraging review. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jewell McChesney
What a fantastic piece of poetry! Your meter and topic are perfect. Such vivid imagery places me exactly where you are as you reminisce God's lovely creation in nature's song! I love this so much! Thank you also for including my artwork.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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What a fantastic piece of poetry! Your meter and topic are perfect. Such vivid imagery places me exactly where you are as you reminisce God's lovely creation in nature's song! I love this so much! Thank you also for including my artwork.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Jewell for this lovely review and the special stars. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank you too for your beautiful artwork. I know this was a sunset, but I thought it was perfect for my sunrise. (smile)
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
This is beautifully written my friend Janet. It is very psalm like, the same as when the prophets gazed on the skies all those years ago, and said words pretty well like youn have in this great gem, well done, Janet, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This is beautifully written my friend Janet. It is very psalm like, the same as when the prophets gazed on the skies all those years ago, and said words pretty well like youn have in this great gem, well done, Janet, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Roy for this lovely review and the special stars. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it and you know, I have been reading the book of Psalms and it certainly did inspire this poem. Thank you for noticing.
Blessings
Janet
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Bless you
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My favorite time of day is the early morning. I love sitting on my back porch facing east, and watching the sun rise and listening to the birds wake up. Thank you for describing this in this wonderfully written poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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My favorite time of day is the early morning. I love sitting on my back porch facing east, and watching the sun rise and listening to the birds wake up. Thank you for describing this in this wonderfully written poem.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Barbara for this thoughtful and encouraging review. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Sitting on the porch and watching the sunrise makes for a wonderful way to start the day.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you, friend. You have no idea how much I needed this. My heart was immediately drawn to the beauty of the Lord and praise. I especially love the blue skies.
Beautifully crafted and illustrated by your talented hand.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, friend. You have no idea how much I needed this. My heart was immediately drawn to the beauty of the Lord and praise. I especially love the blue skies.
Beautifully crafted and illustrated by your talented hand.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you dear Sal for this thoughtful and encouraging review and those special stars. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it and I'm so pleased that the message of God's beautiful skies helped you. I too love those blue skies. Here in North Carolina, we call the Carolina Blue, but I couldn't fit that into the poem. Smile
Take care my dear friend.
Blessings
Janet xoxo
Comment from PENofFIRE
Beautifully written. Your description of morning is as though God Himself were speaking as He performed the task of bringing the gift of another day to His children. I loved it.
May the Lord bless you richly, Pen
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Beautifully written. Your description of morning is as though God Himself were speaking as He performed the task of bringing the gift of another day to His children. I loved it.
May the Lord bless you richly, Pen
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Pen for this thoughtful and encouraging review. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Allieas
Your words are so comforting and beautiful. To me, they're a reminder to practice gratitude and mindfulness, even when it feels like life is overwhelming. Thank you for sharing!
I especially liked this visual: With clouds that look like honied milk
Alex
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Your words are so comforting and beautiful. To me, they're a reminder to practice gratitude and mindfulness, even when it feels like life is overwhelming. Thank you for sharing!
I especially liked this visual: With clouds that look like honied milk
Alex
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Alex for this thoughtful and encouraging review. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Gratitude does help us when life gets overwhelming.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
This is such a beautiful and inspirational poem. Your rhyme and meter are both perfect, and the message is so very moving; encouraging readers to see the beauty that lies right before our eyes!
Xo
Jessica
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This is such a beautiful and inspirational poem. Your rhyme and meter are both perfect, and the message is so very moving; encouraging readers to see the beauty that lies right before our eyes!
Xo
Jessica
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Jessica for this lovely review and the special stars. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet