Guided by Faith
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
So sad... but thank God Emma has such a good supportive family and Seth. I wonder how my life would have turned out if I had a father and boyfriend like Emma has.
Great chapter, I look forward to the next one.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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So sad... but thank God Emma has such a good supportive family and Seth. I wonder how my life would have turned out if I had a father and boyfriend like Emma has.
Great chapter, I look forward to the next one.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Daylily
Anyone would be blessed to have someone like Keith in their life in any capacity...husband, father, friend, or boss.
Here are some minor things:
re: "Remember we're running on no sleep and emotions are raw. Tempers may flair, we need (to) give each other grace."
re: They had been married (were married) for thirty-three years. When they married, Mom was younger than I am.
re: He plugged it in and set it on the nightstand. "If you need to
(delete the word to) anything tonight, I'm only a phone call away."
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Anyone would be blessed to have someone like Keith in their life in any capacity...husband, father, friend, or boss.
Here are some minor things:
re: "Remember we're running on no sleep and emotions are raw. Tempers may flair, we need (to) give each other grace."
re: They had been married (were married) for thirty-three years. When they married, Mom was younger than I am.
re: He plugged it in and set it on the nightstand. "If you need to
(delete the word to) anything tonight, I'm only a phone call away."
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for these catches. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Virtual Six Such an emotional chapter and I felt every word. Aa usual your work is full of sensory words, vibrant imagery, and authentic emotional dialogues. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes!, Friend!
Alex :)x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Virtual Six Such an emotional chapter and I felt every word. Aa usual your work is full of sensory words, vibrant imagery, and authentic emotional dialogues. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes!, Friend!
Alex :)x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sankey
This was a good, sad read. I am sure many relate to your expressions of grief and so on. A couple of spags. I bec(a)[o]me almost functional after a while. To be honest it still hurts, but I've learned to live with it."
"If you need [to] anything tonight,
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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This was a good, sad read. I am sure many relate to your expressions of grief and so on. A couple of spags. I bec(a)[o]me almost functional after a while. To be honest it still hurts, but I've learned to live with it."
"If you need [to] anything tonight,
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the catches. I've corrected them. I appreciate the help.
Comment from BethShelby
You wrote this chapter beautifully. I've been in situations like this ane I felt like I was there again. This is the way in usually is when someon close dies. You make everything seem so real.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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You wrote this chapter beautifully. I've been in situations like this ane I felt like I was there again. This is the way in usually is when someon close dies. You make everything seem so real.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ben Colder
So sad the father passed away but in life a little rain must fall. No doubt Keith and Emma will do fine. No matter the age difference. my dad was 7 years older than my mother but it never made any difference . Good one, Barb.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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So sad the father passed away but in life a little rain must fall. No doubt Keith and Emma will do fine. No matter the age difference. my dad was 7 years older than my mother but it never made any difference . Good one, Barb.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, Again you've written a fine chapter. I understand that religion and faith play a big role here and I appreciate that. To me grief is about deep feelings of loss something we all have to deal with during our lifetime and we all deal with it in different ways. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Hi Barbara, Again you've written a fine chapter. I understand that religion and faith play a big role here and I appreciate that. To me grief is about deep feelings of loss something we all have to deal with during our lifetime and we all deal with it in different ways. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes, in certain situations, it seems we can never do enough. But later we usually find out that anything we do or just letting someone know we care is enough. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Sometimes, in certain situations, it seems we can never do enough. But later we usually find out that anything we do or just letting someone know we care is enough. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I think caring is the important factor. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Losing a loved one is so traumatic, within the span of 4 years I lost my daughter, my dad, my sister and my mother. It was hard, but I never blamed God, I understand the nature of life and lost. The Bible God's word has promised a resurrection, I look forward to the family reunion.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Losing a loved one is so traumatic, within the span of 4 years I lost my daughter, my dad, my sister and my mother. It was hard, but I never blamed God, I understand the nature of life and lost. The Bible God's word has promised a resurrection, I look forward to the family reunion.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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I think we all look forward to that reunion. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You handled this chapter very well, Barb. There was a lot of emotion here, but you did not overdo it. We'll probably hear from the trouble maker again before too long.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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You handled this chapter very well, Barb. There was a lot of emotion here, but you did not overdo it. We'll probably hear from the trouble maker again before too long.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.