Six Appeal
The Perfect Six Contest Entry42 total reviews
Comment from karenina
There ya go!
It's well written, hysterical, well rhymed and metered...
Besides?
"Some jerk cut right in front of her while on an evening drive,
She couldn't give a six, but wouldn't dare give less than five."
THAT alone is worth a sixer from me!
Great title, too!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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There ya go!
It's well written, hysterical, well rhymed and metered...
Besides?
"Some jerk cut right in front of her while on an evening drive,
She couldn't give a six, but wouldn't dare give less than five."
THAT alone is worth a sixer from me!
Great title, too!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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lol, Karenina, thank you for this wonderful review! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it, and appreciated that part in particular, lol! I?m so grateful for your kind words- and fantastic sense of humor- as always! Xoxo
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This was a real highlight!
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This was well written and very funny! You don"t have to be in deep thought to get sixes! Yours deserves it! I love when you relate sixes to perfect tens! It is awesome and hilarious! Great job!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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This was well written and very funny! You don"t have to be in deep thought to get sixes! Yours deserves it! I love when you relate sixes to perfect tens! It is awesome and hilarious! Great job!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Jodi, thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it:)
Xoxo
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I like sixes too, they are pretty and shiny. But I actually want to earn them. Novel, I know. I don't have gobs of money to promote my work. I have to read until my eyeballs cross to promote. The whole system sucks eggs. You write well however. :-)
Karen
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I like sixes too, they are pretty and shiny. But I actually want to earn them. Novel, I know. I don't have gobs of money to promote my work. I have to read until my eyeballs cross to promote. The whole system sucks eggs. You write well however. :-)
Karen
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Karen. I appreciate the review. This wasn't a serious request for sixes; it was just an attempt at humor based on the contest prompt. Believe it or not, I would also prefer to earn those pretty, shiny sixes.
Xo
Jessica
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I did not think you were angling. :-) Karen
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hahaha, Jess! Okay, I don't dare give you a SIX. So, I'll say this so deserves one!
This satirical piece was fun to read; one felt the perplexities of all you gave a six to in your daily travels. Super funny!
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Hahaha, Jess! Okay, I don't dare give you a SIX. So, I'll say this so deserves one!
This satirical piece was fun to read; one felt the perplexities of all you gave a six to in your daily travels. Super funny!
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Haha thank you, my friend! Xo
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a fun slice of life poem about life's misadventures along the way. It is almost a Seinfeldian poem about nothing, just noting life as it happens to us all.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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a fun slice of life poem about life's misadventures along the way. It is almost a Seinfeldian poem about nothing, just noting life as it happens to us all.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Jake, I'm honored by the Seinfeldian reference lol
Xo
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Loved this one Jessica, about the giving of sixes. I loved how you gave them out in everyday life leaving many bemused. Very clever writing, and no I don't have a six left. LOL Still chuckling, and good luck in the contest.
valda
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Loved this one Jessica, about the giving of sixes. I loved how you gave them out in everyday life leaving many bemused. Very clever writing, and no I don't have a six left. LOL Still chuckling, and good luck in the contest.
valda
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Valda, thank you so much! I appreciate the lovely comment much more than any six! lol
Xo
Comment from Bill Schott
I applied the six right off and then went on to get proof of the reward. The six suffers a bit in our world of TEN out here, but people here know what it means. Nice work.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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I applied the six right off and then went on to get proof of the reward. The six suffers a bit in our world of TEN out here, but people here know what it means. Nice work.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend!
Xo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This IS funny. It shows how carried away someone can get and forget that the world's rating scale perfection is a ten not a 6. I hope Jennica realized here mistake and at dinner apologized to her husband and daughter and explained the to her six meant exceptional.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of the day and week,
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Hi Jessica,
This IS funny. It shows how carried away someone can get and forget that the world's rating scale perfection is a ten not a 6. I hope Jennica realized here mistake and at dinner apologized to her husband and daughter and explained the to her six meant exceptional.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of the day and week,
Joan
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much, Joan!!
Xo
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Don't mention it, Jessica.
Joan
Comment from lyenochka
LoL ! Enjoyed your humorous entry for this six contest. You're right that Fanstory has changed our vocabulary and how we view a six! And it's also stressful as a reviewer when we only have six sizes to award. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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LoL ! Enjoyed your humorous entry for this six contest. You're right that Fanstory has changed our vocabulary and how we view a six! And it's also stressful as a reviewer when we only have six sizes to award. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, Helen!! Xo
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Jessica Well done snd here is another one to add to your collection
Your wonderful humour made me smile right through this and what a clever write excellent meter and rhyme too
A six for sure
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Hi Jessica Well done snd here is another one to add to your collection
Your wonderful humour made me smile right through this and what a clever write excellent meter and rhyme too
A six for sure
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Chris, thank you so much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed (and got) it lol. Truly appreciated! Xoxo
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Good luck I wrote one and then realised it was a fiction so didn?t enter the contest but posted it anyway
You may find it lol
Hope you win with this
Cheers Chris