Surprise!
Now that is real FLASH fiction!28 total reviews
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This is awesome! What an unexpected ending! This is a funny story, and has the perfect t picture to go with it! Great flash fiction Douglas, and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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This is awesome! What an unexpected ending! This is a funny story, and has the perfect t picture to go with it! Great flash fiction Douglas, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Ha! I?m still cracking up over this.
Comment from jmdg1954
Your warped sense of humor has me laughing my a__ off this early in the morning.
An excellent entry to the contest. And the best of luck in the voting results.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Your warped sense of humor has me laughing my a__ off this early in the morning.
An excellent entry to the contest. And the best of luck in the voting results.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Oh man, I am still laughing.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I thought perhaps I had partners in crime when I began writing my demented series two weeks ago, and now my thoughts have been concerned. Welcome to my party.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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I thought perhaps I had partners in crime when I began writing my demented series two weeks ago, and now my thoughts have been concerned. Welcome to my party.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Probably best not to win a bigger wiener contest?or is it?
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Yes, you do. (warped sense of justice)
smiley face here
But your injustice was well written. Good work.
Given a couple more words you could have further diminished the man by her bulging balls.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Yes, you do. (warped sense of justice)
smiley face here
But your injustice was well written. Good work.
Given a couple more words you could have further diminished the man by her bulging balls.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Okay, Wayne, you pulled it off 😩 and made me laugh even harder.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a 100 words flash fiction contest entry Rich in theme and Imagery.
Two flasher one male and one a transvestite!
Oops!
Your pensis is bigger and mine is a tiny weenie compared to yours!
How dare you out best my perversioness!
Cute.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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This is a 100 words flash fiction contest entry Rich in theme and Imagery.
Two flasher one male and one a transvestite!
Oops!
Your pensis is bigger and mine is a tiny weenie compared to yours!
How dare you out best my perversioness!
Cute.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thanks for the sixer, Doc. Appreciate you!
Comment from karenina
Oh! Geez! I guess I'm not WOKE enough to guess how this flash would end!
Imagining this scenario gave me the giggles...
(I'm so immature, huh?)
This is outside the box enough to be a contender for the win!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Oh! Geez! I guess I'm not WOKE enough to guess how this flash would end!
Imagining this scenario gave me the giggles...
(I'm so immature, huh?)
This is outside the box enough to be a contender for the win!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I am still laughing, my friend!
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Laughing is a WIN!
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! maybe perverse but very humorous, even the worst of us must be defeated or embarrassed at some time, and this pervert got his, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Ha! Ha! maybe perverse but very humorous, even the worst of us must be defeated or embarrassed at some time, and this pervert got his, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I am still laughing!
Comment from Julie Helms
I did not see that ending coming. A good humorous story told well in just a few, well-placed words, for maximum raging effect. Very reflective of some issues in today's society.
Nicely done!
Julie
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I did not see that ending coming. A good humorous story told well in just a few, well-placed words, for maximum raging effect. Very reflective of some issues in today's society.
Nicely done!
Julie
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I know. I know. Sadly, I am still laughing.