Laughter Leaks
a 15-syllable poem23 total reviews
Comment from gansach
I really like this one, Bill. This 15 syllable poem speaks volumes. The photo selected to illustrate your words is a perfect complement to the message. It is a profound message. This one is a winner in my opinion. Outstanding!
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I really like this one, Bill. This 15 syllable poem speaks volumes. The photo selected to illustrate your words is a perfect complement to the message. It is a profound message. This one is a winner in my opinion. Outstanding!
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you so much, G.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with the alliterative title and the perfect way that humans like to release anxiety through laughter. We need that and your picture really sums it up well. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Great job with the alliterative title and the perfect way that humans like to release anxiety through laughter. We need that and your picture really sums it up well. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you, Helen for the great review and boost.
Comment from Julie Helms
A very perceptive commentary on the psychology behind this type of laughter. Well told in a very brief format.
I have to tell you, when I saw your title, before clicking through to the page, Laughter Leaks brought to mind a completely different image. It is a fact of life for those of us who've birthed a child or two. I could also say Coughing Leaks.
Julie
:-)
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reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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A very perceptive commentary on the psychology behind this type of laughter. Well told in a very brief format.
I have to tell you, when I saw your title, before clicking through to the page, Laughter Leaks brought to mind a completely different image. It is a fact of life for those of us who've birthed a child or two. I could also say Coughing Leaks.
Julie
:-)
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Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I get it. I have undershorts that emit perfume smells if I leak.
