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I am fine.

A reverse poem

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Comment from Wendy G
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That is so very well done. A reverse poem is not ease to do, making sense both ways and saying the opposite. It seems particularly apt for this one, as people do wear masks portraying a facade that all is well when it is not so. Impressive writing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 08-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much, Wendy!
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from lyenochka
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Wow, brilliant! I don't think I read this kind of poem before but I like how you executed it! You give us a completely different message - the one way tells us the narrator is fine. But the other way the narrator tells he/she is not. And it's like that with people who are struggling and putting on a facade. Great job!

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much, Helen! Your encouragement means the world.
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Well this looks incredibly difficult! Excellent work on this. I wouldn't know how to begin lol It's a shame this wasn't entered in a contest. Thank you for sharing your impressive work.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much! A difficult form, for sure. Lol Your kind words are much appreciated.
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from mermaids
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I was unaware of this poetic form until now and I enjoyed reading your words. I will have to try this form of poetry. It is so amazing to read a poem with the same words, yet the meaning changes from top to bottom and bottom to top. Excellent use of words and a smooth poetic flow.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much! I would love to read yours. I'll be on the lookout! ;)
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from Colorado Owl
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This is the first "reverse poem" I've read. It looks like it would be very difficult to construct. Yours works perfectly! Thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much! It was a bit of a challenge, so I appreciate your kind words!
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I've seen one of these reverse poems before about immigrants and was fascinated by how different our words can read upside down. You set your self a difficult task here, Jess, and don't disappoint. It's a good theme because so many of us disguise our true emotions by putting on that social mask. Well done! Debbie xo

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you, my dear friend! This form was a challenge, for sure!
    Xoxo
    Jess
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Whoa! This is like what comedians say in stand-up routines: If a woman ever says, "Fine," know for a fact that she is NOT.

What a super-cool idea this is! I had no idea such a form existed. But now you've piqued my curiosity, and I feel I must try it, too. Thank you for the inspiration!! xoxox

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Right!? lol Thank you so much, beautiful! I would LOVE to see one from you! Xoxoxo
    Jess
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I have never heard of this type of poem. I like the way it is set up. I'm glad I am learning about so many different poems. Very well written.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much, Brenda!
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from Mintybee
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Brilliant. I've read a few of these, and they are so impressive. I have not attempted one yet. Kudos on managing such a challenge. Getting two opposing messages across with one set of words is quite an accomplishment.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Your encouragement means the world! This was a challenging form, for sure. Thank you so much, Mintybee!
    Xo
    Jess
Comment from gansach
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I looked it up and it is called reverse poetry and that's how it is taught, too. I think this is probably one of the most difficult kinds of poems to write. Bravo to you for giving it a try. I think you did a great job. A real challenge which you met well.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate you looking into that, too!
    Xo
    Jess