Barefoot in the Rain
I'm late! I'm Late! What can I do?29 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Great photo, perfect for this romantic story. Sounds like a promising beginning - and sometimes that's where love begins, in the most unlikely of circumstances.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Great photo, perfect for this romantic story. Sounds like a promising beginning - and sometimes that's where love begins, in the most unlikely of circumstances.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Yes it does...Mine began in my backyard with my four year old son shooting the neighbor...We became best friends and 15 years later, life changed and we became much more. Thanks for the review, Wendy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wonderful visual! I can practically feel that water on my feet. And your short story is such a feel-good one that warms the heart (if not the feet!) Another excellent read, Carol. Thank you. Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Wonderful visual! I can practically feel that water on my feet. And your short story is such a feel-good one that warms the heart (if not the feet!) Another excellent read, Carol. Thank you. Debbie
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Debbie! Yes, cold rain water was once fun, splashing in the puddles, but not anymore. I wouldn't be able to stop my teeth from chattering. Thanks for the review and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hah!
What a believable snapshot of the potential for "love at first sight!" Who knows? Stranger things have happened; that's for certain.
Wholesome.
Believable.
Enjoyable.
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
(Will we ever know for certain?) :)
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Hah!
What a believable snapshot of the potential for "love at first sight!" Who knows? Stranger things have happened; that's for certain.
Wholesome.
Believable.
Enjoyable.
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
(Will we ever know for certain?) :)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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I go from scaring the socks off of the reader to leaving them all mushy and thinking about love. Even I wonder where my brain will wonder next. Thanks so much for the review, Diane.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. I wish there was love at first sight. I guess we can dream, can't we ?This is a nice story. Well written. Very interesting.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I wish there was love at first sight. I guess we can dream, can't we ?This is a nice story. Well written. Very interesting.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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It's there Brenda. I promise it is...We just don't always see it because are heart doesn't want to believe. Thanks so much for enjoying the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Nicki.B
This is the perfect beginning to the perfect love story. I love this, the stress and running in the train station, the meeting of the unexpected potential love of your life after the worst morning.
Being late this time had a very positive outcome!
Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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This is the perfect beginning to the perfect love story. I love this, the stress and running in the train station, the meeting of the unexpected potential love of your life after the worst morning.
Being late this time had a very positive outcome!
Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Yes... the silver lining in the cloudy sky, I guess. Thanks so much for enjoying the story and for the kind review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a romantic little flash story! I sure hope he shows up tomorrow with maybe a bottle of glue for her heel. my heart started racing a little under the panic and i was just sitting here lol Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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What a romantic little flash story! I sure hope he shows up tomorrow with maybe a bottle of glue for her heel. my heart started racing a little under the panic and i was just sitting here lol Good job.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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You guys are really messing with my mind, Marilyn...now I can blame it on you and Patrick when someone says I've lost it. I go from scaring myself half to death (locking my doors) and turning around and writing something sappy. Who knew that there was more than one of me living inside this brain? LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Talk about sliding doors, not believing in love at first sight doesn't necessarily mean that it won't happen, particularly when, or if it does. Then it is sure. As my wife and I had a chance meeting, 54 years later we are still together. I think it can be a God thing, He's the best one to know. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : snapping (it) off.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Talk about sliding doors, not believing in love at first sight doesn't necessarily mean that it won't happen, particularly when, or if it does. Then it is sure. As my wife and I had a chance meeting, 54 years later we are still together. I think it can be a God thing, He's the best one to know. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : snapping (it) off.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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I know that God had a hand in my relationship with Mike....After choosing the wrong men earlier, I chose the "bad boy" or he chose me and we ended up living happily ever after.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a delightful and charming story! I love how you captured Kendra's frantic energy and the unexpected connection she makes with the stranger. The imagery of her barefoot running adds a unique touch. Keep it up--this is a joy to read!
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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What a delightful and charming story! I love how you captured Kendra's frantic energy and the unexpected connection she makes with the stranger. The imagery of her barefoot running adds a unique touch. Keep it up--this is a joy to read!
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Michael...I've been climbing out of the box so to speak...I still am writing the novels but it's been interesting to try new things...and discover that people are enjoying them. Thank you so much for the kind review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
I am with Kendra. I think I fell in love at first sight with my wonderful blue-eyed husband. Tomorrow is going to be a bit of a hard hugging day for me as it will be 29 years since the Lord took him home. It is hard to believe that it is 29 years Patricia.
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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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I am with Kendra. I think I fell in love at first sight with my wonderful blue-eyed husband. Tomorrow is going to be a bit of a hard hugging day for me as it will be 29 years since the Lord took him home. It is hard to believe that it is 29 years Patricia.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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My thoughts and prayers are always with you, Patricia....and I send all my love and a big bear hug, too. It doesn't matter if it was last week or 29 years ago; he was the love of your life, and you miss him. Close your eyes, girlfriend, and he'll be there... just don't get too crazy because you have doctor appts. coming up. LOL
Smiles, Carol
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Not only do I have a cardiologist appointment. I also have a dental appointment in the morning.
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Oh heavens...Nightmares for me. I am terrified of the dentist more than the cardioilogist. LOL