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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Will Tova foot the bill for the limo driver, or has Jane been holding out on the girls? This is a very good chapter, and it seems accurate that they finally snap. I would have done it long ago. Thank you for sharing, and Good Riddance, Jane. Happy Travels!
Smiles, Carol


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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
    We just couldn't with shy and wonderful-in-all-her-Amishness Rebekah. She really had to be spared the ugliness.

    Thanks for the nice review, Carol. Very much appreciated. xoxox