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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I enjoyed your amazing version of events here Pam and I am honoured you gave me a mention. So many Fanstory friends to honour and so little space to include them all in our story of the convention. I was thoroughly entertained by your version and I am glad you joined in the fun with this one, a delightful read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the review, Dolly. I appreciate your comments about my version, and I was happy to include you in the convention. I am glad you enjoyed this. I loved the idea that was proposed, and every once in a while it's good to challenge yourself. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from rspoet
Exceptional
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Hello Pam,
A wonderful addition to the stories for the book with a positive, fun-filled
vibe. The description of many of the fanstorians was spot on and the costume
scene with the fight over the color "pink" was marvelous. I guess you should have had the singer "Pink" as a performer.
Well done.
Best wishes to all at the convention.
Robert

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Robert. I appreciate your comments about the "positive, fun filled vibe," and the description of the costumes. Thanks for sharing one that stood out and having Pink as a performer. I think it will be a good convention.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this addition to Gretchen and Rachelle's book. I enjoyed reading. I've been struggling with something to write but have an idea that came to me today. Maybe I can make it work. It seems my muse has taken a vacation.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it. Glad you thought of an idea.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was fun, Pam, I thought you did an amazing job with the dress detail for both men and women, especially the one you chose for Debbie D'Arcy, I can remember wearing something like that. Gosh, that was a long time ago. Well, it sounds like we all enjoyed the fun, my friend. Very well done!! :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the review, Sandra. I appreciate your comments about the story and details of the dress for men and women. I liked Debbie's outfit, too. I think we all did have fun.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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This was unique, and much more tasteful than the others.
If I had known we would be transformed into being our best, I would have brought in the Texas delagation. Karen Cherry Threadgill, Barbara Wilkey, Terry Broxton, Neonewman, Brett Matthew West, and a few others. A good story.

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the review, Karen. I appreciate your comments about this being unique and tasteful. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Jacob1395
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I thought this was a really entertaining addition to this story and I loved reading your version about what happened, particularly with the addition of the Halloween costumes. I really enjoyed reading it.

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about my addition and the Halloween costumes. I am glad you enjoyed it.