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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "End of the Road(trip)"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from marilyn quillen
I think you should have a New Years Party. Maybe on a farm, you could all run through the fields with the cows, shoot off your own fireworks, have a barn dance, there are lots of interesting things you could get into. Another fun thing is jumping from the hay loft into a pile of hay
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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I think you should have a New Years Party. Maybe on a farm, you could all run through the fields with the cows, shoot off your own fireworks, have a barn dance, there are lots of interesting things you could get into. Another fun thing is jumping from the hay loft into a pile of hay
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you for this. I would love to continue this story but at a later date. Thanks for the enthusiastic review. Gretchen
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Great ending for a super fun story. I'm sorry to have it end. I hope you will do another one sometime in the future. Thanks for sharing. enjoyed it.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Great ending for a super fun story. I'm sorry to have it end. I hope you will do another one sometime in the future. Thanks for sharing. enjoyed it.
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed traveling with Rachelle and me. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
In the words of Glinda and Elphaba, "I do believe I have been changed for the better."
It was the luxury of all luxuries to work with you, Gretchen, knowing that no matter what was in my chapter, yours would be the perfect complement to it. You're such a talented writer, and ANYBODY would love to co-author with you. But lucky me; I'm the one who actually got to do so.
Thank you, times a million zillion, for the privilege. Best writing experience I've ever known.
xoxoxoxoxoxooxo
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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In the words of Glinda and Elphaba, "I do believe I have been changed for the better."
It was the luxury of all luxuries to work with you, Gretchen, knowing that no matter what was in my chapter, yours would be the perfect complement to it. You're such a talented writer, and ANYBODY would love to co-author with you. But lucky me; I'm the one who actually got to do so.
Thank you, times a million zillion, for the privilege. Best writing experience I've ever known.
xoxoxoxoxoxooxo
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle. It's been a dream come true. We made a pretty good team. Thank you for this whole experience. Even if the convention wasn't real, I feel like I met a lot of people here on FanStory. Gretchen
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I agree with that assessment completely!
Comment from BethShelby
This was an excellent story. Both of you added your zany sense of humor to make it fun to read. You introduced to some delightful people who live a very difference lifestyle. I enjoyed the way your unique personalities came into play. I glad you found it fun. You two make a great pair.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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This was an excellent story. Both of you added your zany sense of humor to make it fun to read. You introduced to some delightful people who live a very difference lifestyle. I enjoyed the way your unique personalities came into play. I glad you found it fun. You two make a great pair.
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Beth. This has been an experience like no other. I would definitely do it again. Appreciate your wonderful support throughout. Gretchen