Days of Summer
Summer Days39 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Your poem blew me out of the water. What a way with words you have. The rhyming in this poem is stellar and I love the way you tell a story in this poem. The poem flows nicely to completion. Well done. You are such a talented author. I can learn a lot from you.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Your poem blew me out of the water. What a way with words you have. The rhyming in this poem is stellar and I love the way you tell a story in this poem. The poem flows nicely to completion. Well done. You are such a talented author. I can learn a lot from you.
Cecilia
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you Cecilia for such kind words and for the shiny stars
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Hello Pam. Although a bit long this poem is lovely and rhymes every line with clever word choices. I love the idea that summer brings us all together and with autumn the summer breeze is just around the corner. Never a negative word to say about anything so positive as the love of flowers, plants, and trees.
Give us more of the positive stuff. We all need a lift now and then.
I hope all your dreams of summer come true.
Jesse
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Hello Pam. Although a bit long this poem is lovely and rhymes every line with clever word choices. I love the idea that summer brings us all together and with autumn the summer breeze is just around the corner. Never a negative word to say about anything so positive as the love of flowers, plants, and trees.
Give us more of the positive stuff. We all need a lift now and then.
I hope all your dreams of summer come true.
Jesse
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Jesse for such a lovely and wonderful review
Comment from Daniel Milton Taylor
Ahhhhhhhh!!! You paint such an awesome an inviting picture of a beautiful Summer season. I completely enjoyed your poem. Your rhythm and rhymes are top notch. Great job. Keep it up. God bless, Daniel
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Ahhhhhhhh!!! You paint such an awesome an inviting picture of a beautiful Summer season. I completely enjoyed your poem. Your rhythm and rhymes are top notch. Great job. Keep it up. God bless, Daniel
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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hi Daniel. Thank you so much for this great review.
Comment from Tim Margetts
What a great journey through a summer day. Can I come to enjoy the next one with you?
I love your imagery, your opening line
This land is so warm, it's wearing short sleeves,
Immediately sets the time and flavour to be unfolded.
Excellent poetry.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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What a great journey through a summer day. Can I come to enjoy the next one with you?
I love your imagery, your opening line
This land is so warm, it's wearing short sleeves,
Immediately sets the time and flavour to be unfolded.
Excellent poetry.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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hi Tim. Thank you for this wonderful review.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Summer goes by so fast. I like autumn but not looking forward towards winter. I enjoyed your poem. You discussed summer well and also autumn. Great writing.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Summer goes by so fast. I like autumn but not looking forward towards winter. I enjoyed your poem. You discussed summer well and also autumn. Great writing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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hi Brenda. Thank you for this great review.
Comment from royowen
I'm wondering why you don't even answer my reviews, if you want me to stop, I will, but I will stop anyway if you don't answer this one, I don't particularly care if you don't read me, but this is a little rude, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I'm wondering why you don't even answer my reviews, if you want me to stop, I will, but I will stop anyway if you don't answer this one, I don't particularly care if you don't read me, but this is a little rude, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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I'm sorry Roy. I still have issues doing reviews. I'm only going to post about four more times and then I'm gonna take a hiatus.
I do not mean to be rude I will respond to all my reviews very soon since I have nothing left to post
Thank you for all your support your reviews make me happy. See you
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Most welcome
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
One of the things that I really like about your poetry is how you bring sounds to us, not just sights. Like when you say "The darkening night can plainly be heard" and then bring crickets into the picture. I've noticed in other poems I've read of yours that you often bring the world around us to life with sound.
You write some lovely lines, Pam. I really enjoyed your "musings".
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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One of the things that I really like about your poetry is how you bring sounds to us, not just sights. Like when you say "The darkening night can plainly be heard" and then bring crickets into the picture. I've noticed in other poems I've read of yours that you often bring the world around us to life with sound.
You write some lovely lines, Pam. I really enjoyed your "musings".
xo
Pam
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Pam for this nice supportive review
Comment from Begin Again
A little daydreaming as your beautiful descriptive words carry the reader along throughout the beauty of nature. A sweet reprise from the bitterness of winter that is quickly approaching, though this morning instead of 30 like yesterday, it's 63.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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A little daydreaming as your beautiful descriptive words carry the reader along throughout the beauty of nature. A sweet reprise from the bitterness of winter that is quickly approaching, though this morning instead of 30 like yesterday, it's 63.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Carol for this lovely review
Comment from Natureschild
Hi Pam,
Thank you for sharing this beautifully crafted poem of summer. The imagery is strong, and I like the way you personified nature with "wearing short sleeves" and (moon) "taking a dive".
It flows well apart from the line "while dew's getting ready to wet the place down." which deviates from the meter.
Great Job. - Terry
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Hi Pam,
Thank you for sharing this beautifully crafted poem of summer. The imagery is strong, and I like the way you personified nature with "wearing short sleeves" and (moon) "taking a dive".
It flows well apart from the line "while dew's getting ready to wet the place down." which deviates from the meter.
Great Job. - Terry
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you Terry for this wonderful lovely review
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Pam,
Your poem is so vibrant and beautiful
I love the 10-syllable beat of your work; it sounds soft and pleasant like summer. Your descriptions are unique and so creative.
Exceptional poem, Pam.
Best wishes and good luck,
Cindy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Pam,
Your poem is so vibrant and beautiful
I love the 10-syllable beat of your work; it sounds soft and pleasant like summer. Your descriptions are unique and so creative.
Exceptional poem, Pam.
Best wishes and good luck,
Cindy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you Cindy so much for all of these wonderful stars and for a lovely review