Miracles
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Comment from Tim Margetts
Bloomin hell girl, you have ghosts all over the place. I love it.
I never quite know who is going to be human and who is spooky.
I want to know Miriam's story now. It's obvious who she rescued and I guess the plan she thwarted was to get him framed for the other man's death.
Next please...
Tim x
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Bloomin hell girl, you have ghosts all over the place. I love it.
I never quite know who is going to be human and who is spooky.
I want to know Miriam's story now. It's obvious who she rescued and I guess the plan she thwarted was to get him framed for the other man's death.
Next please...
Tim x
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Problem is Miriam saw what went down, but she's a ghost... can't actually testify. And will Donatelli remember anything? Interesting turn of events... There's a dead man in Donatelli's car and as far as anyone is concerned he's disappeared.... Happy reading!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Ahh, a new ghost! So I think Donatelli got dumped on the ground and one of his attackers was beamed by his fellow no-gooder and went over the cliff in the car? No honor among thieves.
"Pop!"
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A very interesting chapter, with thickening plot!
Julie
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Ahh, a new ghost! So I think Donatelli got dumped on the ground and one of his attackers was beamed by his fellow no-gooder and went over the cliff in the car? No honor among thieves.
"Pop!"
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A very interesting chapter, with thickening plot!
Julie
:-)
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Fixed and thank you!
Apologize for being so far behind but I didn't want to just say thanks for the review and then forget to fix things...so I hang on to them until I do it. Appreciate the info and the comments.
Smiles, Carol