Each one teach one
My philosophy25 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Jesse.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A very good message in your poem.
-I agree that we need to have a
philosophy of togetherness,
looking out for each other, as
opposed to singling an individual or group
out for something you don't like.
-I like your combination of "demonstrate" and "hesitate."
-A good image: "reach past the sun."
-A very good motto at the end.
-Thanks for sharing it.
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-Nice image and presentation, Jesse.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A very good message in your poem.
-I agree that we need to have a
philosophy of togetherness,
looking out for each other, as
opposed to singling an individual or group
out for something you don't like.
-I like your combination of "demonstrate" and "hesitate."
-A good image: "reach past the sun."
-A very good motto at the end.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I am in complete agreement with you on this. Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone felt this way? As it is, there's too many who will only work together with people who are exactly like them. Here we sit...waiting for the world to change. Good job on this one, Jesse
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I am in complete agreement with you on this. Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone felt this way? As it is, there's too many who will only work together with people who are exactly like them. Here we sit...waiting for the world to change. Good job on this one, Jesse
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
A great philosophy. This reminded me of time in my teens when I was a Playground Supervisor. I was playing a game with a bunch of the youths there. One boy kept causing trouble. Finally, I asked him if he knew how to play the game. He said "No". So I taught him gently, and he had more fun than anyone else. I learned a valuable lesson that day.
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A great philosophy. This reminded me of time in my teens when I was a Playground Supervisor. I was playing a game with a bunch of the youths there. One boy kept causing trouble. Finally, I asked him if he knew how to play the game. He said "No". So I taught him gently, and he had more fun than anyone else. I learned a valuable lesson that day.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Michele Harber
I really like this. It's simple yet profound. If each of us teaches, through word or action, we can change the world! Perhaps the most important lines in the poem are, "we must lead not follow, today, not tomorrow." Thank you for offering words to live by. I hope I can live up to them.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I really like this. It's simple yet profound. If each of us teaches, through word or action, we can change the world! Perhaps the most important lines in the poem are, "we must lead not follow, today, not tomorrow." Thank you for offering words to live by. I hope I can live up to them.
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I know you can, Michele. You've got hutspa and it shows in the way you write your poetry.
Thanks for being one of the first to review this poem.
It feels good to get back to writing poetry for a change.
Your support means a lot to me.
Have a happy day.
Jesse
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, we must continue to use our own brains and not follow anybody. If in question, then pray about it. God will give us answers. I hope you know you remain in my prayers.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Yes, we must continue to use our own brains and not follow anybody. If in question, then pray about it. God will give us answers. I hope you know you remain in my prayers.
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks for adding me to your prayer list.
Jesse