Reminiscing
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Teenage Males, Greg"A collection of short stories
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Comment from estory
This is life we kids. We have all been there. In the end, you have to be a mom, and not a friend. But it also shows how kids don't quite think things through. Told with a realistic language, very down to earth, and we get the emotions coming up through the voices. estory
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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This is life we kids. We have all been there. In the end, you have to be a mom, and not a friend. But it also shows how kids don't quite think things through. Told with a realistic language, very down to earth, and we get the emotions coming up through the voices. estory
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written that I enjoyed listening to it. You're certain structure your paragraphing and your punctuation will make for a very good piece to listen to. May you have a wonderful day and may you have a delightful weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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This is very well written that I enjoyed listening to it. You're certain structure your paragraphing and your punctuation will make for a very good piece to listen to. May you have a wonderful day and may you have a delightful weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi Barbara, a virtual 6 stars
for you. To your son Greg:
Thank you for your bravery
and outstanding service. A
great read. My older brother
was a Navy submariner for
I think 25 years. He wasn't in
a war. Have a creative Thursday. Blessings :)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Hi Barbara, a virtual 6 stars
for you. To your son Greg:
Thank you for your bravery
and outstanding service. A
great read. My older brother
was a Navy submariner for
I think 25 years. He wasn't in
a war. Have a creative Thursday. Blessings :)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Barbara, as soon as you mentioned water trailing from the front door, I knew what he had done and began laughing. I think he was being very resourceful. And, to his credit, you didn't tell him he COULDN'T bring the hose through the house:-)
That's a great story.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Barbara, as soon as you mentioned water trailing from the front door, I knew what he had done and began laughing. I think he was being very resourceful. And, to his credit, you didn't tell him he COULDN'T bring the hose through the house:-)
That's a great story.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you for understanding. So true. Like your new picture.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Oh, the joys of being a parent. Lol. He did do as you asked. Just a minor technicality. He must have learned his lesson though, because he became a responsible adult who stepped up in the Army. Entertaining story. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Oh, the joys of being a parent. Lol. He did do as you asked. Just a minor technicality. He must have learned his lesson though, because he became a responsible adult who stepped up in the Army. Entertaining story. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
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Comment from Jacob1395
I imagine your son must've regretted doing that when you told him he wouldn't be going to the game until he'd cleaned up the mess. A well written chapter, Barbara, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I imagine your son must've regretted doing that when you told him he wouldn't be going to the game until he'd cleaned up the mess. A well written chapter, Barbara, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
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Comment from Sankey
Thanks for notifying me of this wonderful chapter about your son. it was a great read and I am sure others will agree with me. Keep up the good work, you are a blessing.
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Thanks for notifying me of this wonderful chapter about your son. it was a great read and I am sure others will agree with me. Keep up the good work, you are a blessing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
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Comment from jmdg1954
That is too funny. Now. Not then. These are lasting memories that once you get them all down on paper, via this book, it'll be a nice gift one day for allnn no your boys.
Good memory,
John
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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That is too funny. Now. Not then. These are lasting memories that once you get them all down on paper, via this book, it'll be a nice gift one day for allnn no your boys.
Good memory,
John
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Yep that sounds like a teenage boy. But, mine would know to pinch the hose :-) have a good week. It was pitch dark by 6pm here. Weird. Love to you and yours. Karen
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Yep that sounds like a teenage boy. But, mine would know to pinch the hose :-) have a good week. It was pitch dark by 6pm here. Weird. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
He used the same reasoning my 14-year-old son and 13-year-old daughter decided they wouldn't have to pull weeds from the bean rows if they just pulled the beans. Kids can always be a challenge, but I liked it better when they were thinking as ours did than screaming at other video players like a 10-year-old is doing right now.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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He used the same reasoning my 14-year-old son and 13-year-old daughter decided they wouldn't have to pull weeds from the bean rows if they just pulled the beans. Kids can always be a challenge, but I liked it better when they were thinking as ours did than screaming at other video players like a 10-year-old is doing right now.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you for understanding. So true about the video games.