Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your words are so true. Nature is a powerful healer. Excellent two line poem with smooth rhyming and a smooth flow of words. You did well creating a two line poem.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed the read. Take care.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent 10 word poem for the contest. We definitely do rely on nature for our survival in this crazy world.
Lovely artwork and presentation too.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025

Janet,
Thanks for your review. So glad you enjoyed the read.

Comment from Karen Cherry

Excellent

These little poems are incredibly hard. How do you cram all your lovely thoughts into such few words? You made it seem so obvious and easy. You did very good work here.
Karen

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thanks for your review. All the best.

reply by Karen Cherry on 04-Apr-2025

:-)

Comment from Harry Craft

Excellent

A great ten word poem. I enjoyed reading it and the photo absolutey resonates with the poem to get the point across. Such a real subject too. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thanks for the review. All the best.

reply by Harry Craft on 04-Apr-2025

You are so welcome!

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Sadly, our leaders have not yet understood that Mother Nature can live without us, but we can not live without her precious resources.

So, it's time to clean up our act; we need to stop exploiting, abusing, and trashing our home planet.

We need to show respect towards Mother Nature; she is generous and provides us with everything we need to thrive as a species.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thanks for your review. Totally agree with you.
Cheers

reply by tempeste on 05-Apr-2025

Ciao !

You now have 5 votes !

Best of luck!🍀

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This ten-word poem, Nature's Gift, has the proper word count and notes that we are the benefactors of nature's endless resources. From the sun above and the oil below, we are served.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thanks for the kind review. Take care.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I liked this piece. At first glance it appears quite simplistic but it's actually much deeper than that. I wonder, though, how much nature will keep giving when we constantly encroach upon it and mistreat it.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thanks for the review. Not sure how much Nature can take from our lack of respect.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really like your poem. The message is so uplifting. I like how you remind me of the constant gifts nature provides for us to live. It's a beautiful message about how we depend on nature. And you do this with 10 words! Thank you for sharing this!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025

Thanks so much for your review.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I liked this poem quite a bit. You got the syllable count right, and I liked the rhyme you employed. The picture was nice, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You are so right here, no matter what happens in the world, the sun always comes up and sets and the moon shines. The birds sing every morning and nature never stops thriving, it is only us humans who bear grudges and start wars. I enjoyed your positive words here, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.