Life Goes On
A young girl loses her best friend, Mocha.....26 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
That first Christmas without a loved one is always tough, even when that loved one is a child's beloved pet, often a child's first serious experience with loss. The conversation you portray between mother and child is warm and sensitive, Carol - this poignant story is a joy to read. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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That first Christmas without a loved one is always tough, even when that loved one is a child's beloved pet, often a child's first serious experience with loss. The conversation you portray between mother and child is warm and sensitive, Carol - this poignant story is a joy to read. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Brooke
You recognize my heart even when it is blindfolded...I am truly blessed and honored. Thank you for the wonderful review...
Comment from ms. cardshark
I love dogs and stars. This one left me misty-eyed. Touching story, sad and happy at the same time. Enjoyed reading it.
MM
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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I love dogs and stars. This one left me misty-eyed. Touching story, sad and happy at the same time. Enjoyed reading it.
MM
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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MsCardshark
I too am in love with my furry four legged pals and I believe the stars hold much for us to ponder...Thank you so much for the kind review...Smiles
Comment from BethShelby
I love this story. It is so hard for children and even adults to lose a beloved pet. This story shows how the child comes to terms with the loss by thinking of her dog as a star that watches over her. The new puppy helps make her day complete. It has a happy ending.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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I love this story. It is so hard for children and even adults to lose a beloved pet. This story shows how the child comes to terms with the loss by thinking of her dog as a star that watches over her. The new puppy helps make her day complete. It has a happy ending.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Beth
Having lost a four legged friend...my heart always belongs to them...I am so pleased that you enjoyed the story. Thank you for the kind comments...Smiles
Comment from ZeBestBlonde1
Hello to you,
I really liked the title and the story is cute. I did have one question because I had to go back and look a couple more times but did I miss something-is the puppy Mocha or Max?
Still, it was a nice, uplifting story of love and loss for a little girl or boy and how life does go on and can get better
Nice story
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Hello to you,
I really liked the title and the story is cute. I did have one question because I had to go back and look a couple more times but did I miss something-is the puppy Mocha or Max?
Still, it was a nice, uplifting story of love and loss for a little girl or boy and how life does go on and can get better
Nice story
Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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ZeBestBlonde
Thanks for catching that for me..I originally wrote the story as Max but when I found the picture that had Mocha on the cross I changed it...Guess I missed the ending...I appreciate the review and athe help...smiles
Comment from Heidixoxo
What a sad story!! Very well written and the emotions felt real and true. I enjoyed reading this froms tart to finish as its a great entry. Job well done and best of luck to you....xoxo
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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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What a sad story!! Very well written and the emotions felt real and true. I enjoyed reading this froms tart to finish as its a great entry. Job well done and best of luck to you....xoxo
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
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Heidi
I always appreciate your comments and reviews...Thank you so much for the kind words...My heart connects with my four legged friends and their loss...thus the story. Smiles....
Comment from jmdg1954
To me, sometimes the best stories evolve around small children and animals. For me as well, dogs, as I love our's more then anything... an excellent story about life, love and growing, good uck in the contest
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To me, sometimes the best stories evolve around small children and animals. For me as well, dogs, as I love our's more then anything... an excellent story about life, love and growing, good uck in the contest
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Comment Written 26-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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jmdg
Yes, I must agree...my children and I (with a heart of a child I think) adore my furry friends as if they too were children...Thank you for the wonderful review....Sending you a smile