Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Winds of Change"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Lulube
the heart that wants love so bad but has been broken before. so be leery of betrayal, deceit for a love from the bottom of your heart has still far corners to repair. Damn that giving heart that yearns to give and receive, knowing how life would be so much better with love for another. You asked all the right questions in thought. for those of us that have had a tough time with relationships, this fits the bill to the tee.
good work
lulube
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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the heart that wants love so bad but has been broken before. so be leery of betrayal, deceit for a love from the bottom of your heart has still far corners to repair. Damn that giving heart that yearns to give and receive, knowing how life would be so much better with love for another. You asked all the right questions in thought. for those of us that have had a tough time with relationships, this fits the bill to the tee.
good work
lulube
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
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welcome
lulube
Comment from LIJ Red
I crave to find test points and put a meter on this and take readings. There are currents and flux not clearly defined to me. But for imagery and word selection, I can recognized poetry.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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I crave to find test points and put a meter on this and take readings. There are currents and flux not clearly defined to me. But for imagery and word selection, I can recognized poetry.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from GWinterwin
Another good poem with a good picture to make a complete. Edward on rhyming as you talk about thoughts of the past. Thoughts of a time, when things were good.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Another good poem with a good picture to make a complete. Edward on rhyming as you talk about thoughts of the past. Thoughts of a time, when things were good.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good description that allow me to feel the emotion within the words. Good alliteration with so/still...love/life...dare/dream...will/winds...shelter/shores. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Good description that allow me to feel the emotion within the words. Good alliteration with so/still...love/life...dare/dream...will/winds...shelter/shores. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Janet Foor
Perfect picture to accompany this well written poem of a lost love.
If I dare show you my heart, will you cherish the passion it would bring? This is a great line that says so much to the reader.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Perfect picture to accompany this well written poem of a lost love.
If I dare show you my heart, will you cherish the passion it would bring? This is a great line that says so much to the reader.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you for the 6
Gary
Comment from emrpoems
Like ripples betraying still waters, will you stay with me?
Or run for the shelter of the near shores---
Will you be a true friend through thick and thin?
This is written with lots of emotion and most of all sincerity.
It really is a beautiful piece and en enjoyable read
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Like ripples betraying still waters, will you stay with me?
Or run for the shelter of the near shores---
Will you be a true friend through thick and thin?
This is written with lots of emotion and most of all sincerity.
It really is a beautiful piece and en enjoyable read
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from DanielEkine
Very well re-branded.
Just a suggestion,
"When I fall, will you extend your inner spirit to catch my worthlessness,"
Can be, "When I fall, will you extend your inner spirit to catch my worthlessness,"
Since you are asking an inner-self question in the reflection.
Very eloquent. Well defined. Extraordinaire, your work is. It really deserves all the recognition.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Very well re-branded.
Just a suggestion,
"When I fall, will you extend your inner spirit to catch my worthlessness,"
Can be, "When I fall, will you extend your inner spirit to catch my worthlessness,"
Since you are asking an inner-self question in the reflection.
Very eloquent. Well defined. Extraordinaire, your work is. It really deserves all the recognition.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
Here is one more that I strongly believe is NOT from the heart. Who, on earth, are you writing about? On top of some precast lines manufactured for public use some decades past, the punctuation is terrible. Kenny
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Here is one more that I strongly believe is NOT from the heart. Who, on earth, are you writing about? On top of some precast lines manufactured for public use some decades past, the punctuation is terrible. Kenny
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Kenny get a life mate
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What does my life have to do with triteness of phrase, and poor punctuation?
Comment from JeffreyVPerry
I do not understand the word "moonlight" in the poem. You express the doubts I guess we all have when in love. Yet change is also a truth. Your poem has a nice watery flow and seems reflective. But I ask is it about you changing yourself or will she have the capacity to do with your heart what she wants instead of you having that sole choice. This is what your change may be about. Sometimes we are reflected in how what we doubt in others.
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I do not understand the word "moonlight" in the poem. You express the doubts I guess we all have when in love. Yet change is also a truth. Your poem has a nice watery flow and seems reflective. But I ask is it about you changing yourself or will she have the capacity to do with your heart what she wants instead of you having that sole choice. This is what your change may be about. Sometimes we are reflected in how what we doubt in others.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I liked the other poems you have posted here today, but this one strikes me as trite... another 'love' poem of infatuation and desire. Yawwwwn. We have far too many of these already, I think.
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I liked the other poems you have posted here today, but this one strikes me as trite... another 'love' poem of infatuation and desire. Yawwwwn. We have far too many of these already, I think.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014