Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Aspirations"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from pugrpoems
Dear deepwater,
I like your message. I do not like the fifth line,"Or bend to the ever moving passage of age." Age and time cannot be stopped. That is probqably why so many people regret what could have been, or regret how they treated people in the past. I like it other than that. Great job! pugrpoems.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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Dear deepwater,
I like your message. I do not like the fifth line,"Or bend to the ever moving passage of age." Age and time cannot be stopped. That is probqably why so many people regret what could have been, or regret how they treated people in the past. I like it other than that. Great job! pugrpoems.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2010
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thank you for the comments and review Pugrpoems
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi deepwater,
Maybe you should change your name to deepthinker? :-) (just kidding). I really enjoyed this one too. You are touching on so many excellent topics in your book. This fits perfectly into your fine collection. Well done.
Cheers, W ^-^
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Hi deepwater,
Maybe you should change your name to deepthinker? :-) (just kidding). I really enjoyed this one too. You are touching on so many excellent topics in your book. This fits perfectly into your fine collection. Well done.
Cheers, W ^-^
Comment Written 02-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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thank you W^-^ for reading and the review
Comment from lola29
What an adorable picture. You write with such a fervid passion, and you seem to be a deeply committed person to your past and to your future. You are write so beautifully.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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What an adorable picture. You write with such a fervid passion, and you seem to be a deeply committed person to your past and to your future. You are write so beautifully.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you Lola for your words and review Gary
Comment from Mª Luisa López Pisú
Muy bonito y logrado poema, est¡ muy conseguido y escrito con mucha inspiraciłn. Felicidades.
Vi tu verso fluido, escrito con mucha experiencia. De hacer cambios yo creo que este poema se da para m¡s argumento. Saludos de Din¡mica
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Muy bonito y logrado poema, est¡ muy conseguido y escrito con mucha inspiraciłn. Felicidades.
Vi tu verso fluido, escrito con mucha experiencia. De hacer cambios yo creo que este poema se da para m¡s argumento. Saludos de Din¡mica
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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again thank you for this review
Comment from LadyWave
I love the old pictures that accompany your poems. They really add an extra flavor to them. I think you pose great questions, especially in the second line of the poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I love the old pictures that accompany your poems. They really add an extra flavor to them. I think you pose great questions, especially in the second line of the poem.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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again thank you for this review
Comment from InHisownwrite
There is some very deep thought in this, my friend...
(would he stand as a stone on priciples, or bend to the ever moving passage of age)(or live with the premise of whatever happens, he will continue his journey)
Love the last line.... Bryan
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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There is some very deep thought in this, my friend...
(would he stand as a stone on priciples, or bend to the ever moving passage of age)(or live with the premise of whatever happens, he will continue his journey)
Love the last line.... Bryan
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you Bryan
Comment from idnami
I definitely like your free verse style best. This conflict you have described is something any thinking person who attempts to live consciously can relate to. How do I respond to the judgments of one who is close to me? How do they shape me or help me shape myself? Will my convictions be eroded or strengthened?
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I definitely like your free verse style best. This conflict you have described is something any thinking person who attempts to live consciously can relate to. How do I respond to the judgments of one who is close to me? How do they shape me or help me shape myself? Will my convictions be eroded or strengthened?
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you for the review idnami
Comment from percival86jack
It is a never ending battle within your soul... "Or live under the premise of whatever happens he will continue his journey with the conflict of never finding peace" Life has so many twist and turns... which is the right road. Kudos Gary... cheers, Jack
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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It is a never ending battle within your soul... "Or live under the premise of whatever happens he will continue his journey with the conflict of never finding peace" Life has so many twist and turns... which is the right road. Kudos Gary... cheers, Jack
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you Jack for this review
Comment from forestport12
I liked the overall theme and what this represents. The analogy if "being judged by our partner," perhaps, and gives us pause for deep thought.
I was wishing to have more of differing examples of relationships, that bolster your theme.
It also makes me think if the strength of a Willow that bends but has deep roots; or the strength of leather that like an old shoe or glove that fits better with age.
Thanks for your authenticate, enjoyable voice.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I liked the overall theme and what this represents. The analogy if "being judged by our partner," perhaps, and gives us pause for deep thought.
I was wishing to have more of differing examples of relationships, that bolster your theme.
It also makes me think if the strength of a Willow that bends but has deep roots; or the strength of leather that like an old shoe or glove that fits better with age.
Thanks for your authenticate, enjoyable voice.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you for the review forstport
Comment from mariatime
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. The abstract imagery of emotions shone. I have always been in awe of the internal conflicts that must envelope a soldier's soul for his entire life. Thank you for allowing the readers inside for a few well- communicated moments.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. The abstract imagery of emotions shone. I have always been in awe of the internal conflicts that must envelope a soldier's soul for his entire life. Thank you for allowing the readers inside for a few well- communicated moments.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you for the review mariatime