Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Fields of stone,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from janian
this is beautifull . reminds me of watching soldiers from my hometown leave for Iraq. ilove how mentoin god as our anchor
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this is beautifull . reminds me of watching soldiers from my hometown leave for Iraq. ilove how mentoin god as our anchor
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thank you for reading Jan
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your welcome! bless you ,janian.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I seem to be reading lots of your work at the moment, and rest assured that's not a complaint. This is like a rural take on the concrete jungle metaphor, with a lot more pedigree and history. I loved it!
Mike
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I seem to be reading lots of your work at the moment, and rest assured that's not a complaint. This is like a rural take on the concrete jungle metaphor, with a lot more pedigree and history. I loved it!
Mike
Comment Written 20-May-2010
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thank you mike GW
Comment from Peter@Poole
This is a rugged, poignant sort of poem, filled with a variety of fitting images of war and its effects. Where did you serve?; I spent some time in 9 Bde, Northern Ireland, but was a kid during WW2. Peter
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This is a rugged, poignant sort of poem, filled with a variety of fitting images of war and its effects. Where did you serve?; I spent some time in 9 Bde, Northern Ireland, but was a kid during WW2. Peter
Comment Written 20-May-2010
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Peter NI 70 71 73 and other locations but thank you for reading
Comment from El.Marjie
Great poem about the end of leave time. Full of great word pictures but I would like to see some punctuation, or some separation by spacing, or some rhyme. Something to make the poem seem more organized. Consider working on it some more. It could be better. Best, Marjie
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Great poem about the end of leave time. Full of great word pictures but I would like to see some punctuation, or some separation by spacing, or some rhyme. Something to make the poem seem more organized. Consider working on it some more. It could be better. Best, Marjie
Comment Written 20-May-2010
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Thank you for your comments El but I think I will leave it the way it is, as this is my style of writing and I write for myself, but again thanks for your comments
Comment from Awatef
This poem was not recognized and rated all time best for nothing. It is a great poem and the formatting is just right. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great job in writing.
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This poem was not recognized and rated all time best for nothing. It is a great poem and the formatting is just right. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the great job in writing.
Comment Written 20-May-2010
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thank you again Awatef, GW
Comment from Donovan
Certainly a great topic that evokes emotion from those that have experienced this on both ends of the stick. I like the idea of the thoughts going through the mind. Well done.
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Certainly a great topic that evokes emotion from those that have experienced this on both ends of the stick. I like the idea of the thoughts going through the mind. Well done.
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thank you Donovan
Comment from Penpal
This is a poignant piece which speaks of death with expression and care. Though sad, I enjoyed reading it as it reminds this reader that we all owe God a death.
Pen
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This is a poignant piece which speaks of death with expression and care. Though sad, I enjoyed reading it as it reminds this reader that we all owe God a death.
Pen
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thank you for reading Pen
Comment from enjoi
I think you did rather well with this poem. No errors in the construction. Interesting imagery you're mining here. Thank you for sharing.
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I think you did rather well with this poem. No errors in the construction. Interesting imagery you're mining here. Thank you for sharing.
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again thank you enjoi
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was food for thought and thought provoking , wonderful piece of poetry I enjoyed the imagery an emotions that were present, and this particular piece of poetry well done. No errors of mistakes Alexander
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I thought this was food for thought and thought provoking , wonderful piece of poetry I enjoyed the imagery an emotions that were present, and this particular piece of poetry well done. No errors of mistakes Alexander
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thanks again Alexander for reading
Comment from misscookie
This is an outstanding poem.
I love the miovementof your poem and the artwork is perfect for this wrie.I believ everyone who reads this will feel something we are sad for the falling, yet oroud for them all.
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This is an outstanding poem.
I love the miovementof your poem and the artwork is perfect for this wrie.I believ everyone who reads this will feel something we are sad for the falling, yet oroud for them all.
Comment Written 20-May-2010
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thank you miss for the 6 stars Gary