Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "To all unwritten things"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Anwesha Ghosh
the message is very clear ,true and equivocate the central truth of human life. each of our life is actually a myth, very much transient,moments passing between our remitting and unremitting consciousness, exploring the world and also the inside of us. as a human being we all like to voice our feeling, of what we passed through, but tragically the voices of commenman is never heard so the lingering hope of the poet that the unheard vioces of our forefathers will pass in the tell-tale act of speech and will become rather modern fable.
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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the message is very clear ,true and equivocate the central truth of human life. each of our life is actually a myth, very much transient,moments passing between our remitting and unremitting consciousness, exploring the world and also the inside of us. as a human being we all like to voice our feeling, of what we passed through, but tragically the voices of commenman is never heard so the lingering hope of the poet that the unheard vioces of our forefathers will pass in the tell-tale act of speech and will become rather modern fable.
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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if you say so
Comment from gargoyle socks
I like the point you make here. There are so many things that never get written down. The only place they live is in people's memories. It seems a shame not to write more things down to share with others after we are gone. Great poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I like the point you make here. There are so many things that never get written down. The only place they live is in people's memories. It seems a shame not to write more things down to share with others after we are gone. Great poem.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you sorrow for the review
Comment from JimLee
I really like your thought here. With certain people of a specific political leaning, succeeding at rewriting history, the only way we can pass on our history is by word of mouth. Great expression!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I really like your thought here. With certain people of a specific political leaning, succeeding at rewriting history, the only way we can pass on our history is by word of mouth. Great expression!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thanks Jim
Comment from noland
Good question. And like all good questions, we'll probably never know the answer in our lifetime. Well done. Excellent message. Write on!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Good question. And like all good questions, we'll probably never know the answer in our lifetime. Well done. Excellent message. Write on!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you noland for the review
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You're welcome.
Comment from DrJane
This poem brings to mind the fine art of storytelling, which is almost a lost art. This is a great reminder to all of us that when an old person dies, a library is lost. We must record their wisdom before it's too late. Great photo.
Blessings,
Jane
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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This poem brings to mind the fine art of storytelling, which is almost a lost art. This is a great reminder to all of us that when an old person dies, a library is lost. We must record their wisdom before it's too late. Great photo.
Blessings,
Jane
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you Dr Jane for your review and comments
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
It's scarey nowadays because instead of writing things we type things. I know you said about things being spoken and not written but I think typing things without printing is just as bad because once all the memory is gone or the computer crashes everything is gone. I liked your poem and it's a good reminder not to just say things but maybe take some time to actually write things down. I don't think things would be the way they are if people had actaully written things down
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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It's scarey nowadays because instead of writing things we type things. I know you said about things being spoken and not written but I think typing things without printing is just as bad because once all the memory is gone or the computer crashes everything is gone. I liked your poem and it's a good reminder not to just say things but maybe take some time to actually write things down. I don't think things would be the way they are if people had actaully written things down
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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you are right things get lost over time Red so please write them down
Comment from jack silver
this poem was excellently written and put together. I enjoyed reading alot. Liked the idea you used as well. with wondering if the secrets and knowledge would be passed onto the children of the world.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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this poem was excellently written and put together. I enjoyed reading alot. Liked the idea you used as well. with wondering if the secrets and knowledge would be passed onto the children of the world.
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Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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thank you jack for reading i wonder to
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look forward to more!
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thanks jack
Comment from Ponder
Hi Deepwater,
I come from a culture with a long history of epic songs and oral history passed down and along. I found your poem interestign adn thought provoking and often wonder if the twenty-first centruy, with all it's technology will bring an end to the fireside singer and poet.
Very nice poem.
Jules
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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Hi Deepwater,
I come from a culture with a long history of epic songs and oral history passed down and along. I found your poem interestign adn thought provoking and often wonder if the twenty-first centruy, with all it's technology will bring an end to the fireside singer and poet.
Very nice poem.
Jules
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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thank you Jules
Comment from Charlene0513
To deepwater,
A very open and honest account of the future and it's up coming generation to come.
You have captured the essence of the poem with depth and clarity of mind of our children of today.
Only time will tell.
Thank you for your acknowledgement of the problems of today that lie ahead of us all.
Charlene
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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To deepwater,
A very open and honest account of the future and it's up coming generation to come.
You have captured the essence of the poem with depth and clarity of mind of our children of today.
Only time will tell.
Thank you for your acknowledgement of the problems of today that lie ahead of us all.
Charlene
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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thank you, b1merm
Comment from miss joyce
This touches on my thoughts as well. My son will never hear the stories my grandmother told me. She was a wealth of learning and these new generations will not hear the wonderful and nurturing tales as we have.
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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This touches on my thoughts as well. My son will never hear the stories my grandmother told me. She was a wealth of learning and these new generations will not hear the wonderful and nurturing tales as we have.
Comment Written 10-May-2010
reply by the author on 10-May-2010
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thank you for reading Miss joyce
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You're so welcome!
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thanks again GW
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You are most welcome!