Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Lest we Forget"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Gideon Roth
Hello Deepwater. I was happy to see that you had posted another poem. This is very well done and so appropriate for this Memorial Day time of year. Keep up the great writing...Gideon
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
Hello Deepwater. I was happy to see that you had posted another poem. This is very well done and so appropriate for this Memorial Day time of year. Keep up the great writing...Gideon
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you Gideon
Comment from Frozen Fire
Although I wish war would end, I'm proud and grateful of all the men and women that put their lives on the line for us day after day, year after year, and decade after decade. This is a well-written piece you've penned.
Shirley
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
Although I wish war would end, I'm proud and grateful of all the men and women that put their lives on the line for us day after day, year after year, and decade after decade. This is a well-written piece you've penned.
Shirley
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you Shirley
Comment from JimLee
Wow! This one says a lot. You have captured the commitment of practically every soldier in America.
I hope you have nipped the conscience of all who read this.
Americans need better to understand what gave us the freedom we have had up until recently. Defend our soldiers and defend our constitution.
Excellent poem!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
Wow! This one says a lot. You have captured the commitment of practically every soldier in America.
I hope you have nipped the conscience of all who read this.
Americans need better to understand what gave us the freedom we have had up until recently. Defend our soldiers and defend our constitution.
Excellent poem!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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thank you Jim
Comment from Vladilynn
Working in a military bases..I really do agree with you! Thank you for the wonderful tribute for our militaries in all country, they deserved your poem.
I loved how your art fit with your words.
Well written.
Love much
Lynn:0)
(scratching head) Do I ned to say Nice meetng you!!?
Geeezzh~ I can't remember everyone here. lol
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
Working in a military bases..I really do agree with you! Thank you for the wonderful tribute for our militaries in all country, they deserved your poem.
I loved how your art fit with your words.
Well written.
Love much
Lynn:0)
(scratching head) Do I ned to say Nice meetng you!!?
Geeezzh~ I can't remember everyone here. lol
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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your welcome and thank you Lynn
Comment from laren
This is a great poem honoring soldiers who died in wars.
Sometimes they don't receive honors because de way they died. So there is a memorial day to remember them.
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
This is a great poem honoring soldiers who died in wars.
Sometimes they don't receive honors because de way they died. So there is a memorial day to remember them.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you Laren
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from daniela.albu
This is a powerful,solemn poem written in simple words that go directly to the heart. I think this poem will face time with great success and remain a good piece of writing for generations to come.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
This is a powerful,solemn poem written in simple words that go directly to the heart. I think this poem will face time with great success and remain a good piece of writing for generations to come.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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thank you daniela
Comment from tazzaangel
very much ejoyed this poem it is a fitting tribute to our service men and women and your right we must never forget my father was a service men and my grand father and great grandfather before him thakyou for this lasting tribute
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
very much ejoyed this poem it is a fitting tribute to our service men and women and your right we must never forget my father was a service men and my grand father and great grandfather before him thakyou for this lasting tribute
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
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welcome Tazz
Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn
This is a beautiful, inspiring and moving tribute to all those who have lost their lives defending their country. This is a topic close to my heart. Very well done!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
This is a beautiful, inspiring and moving tribute to all those who have lost their lives defending their country. This is a topic close to my heart. Very well done!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you Janine
Comment from Marathonwriter
Hello deepwater,
I enjoyed reading your poem. My favorite part is your last line. I like how you included sisters.
:0)Chris
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
Hello deepwater,
I enjoyed reading your poem. My favorite part is your last line. I like how you included sisters.
:0)Chris
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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welcome Chris
Comment from Frank Fiction
Excellent poem, ges right to the point, and a perfect a picture to go along with it. Crossing heaven or earth to defend our families and countries. Great line. THanks.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
Excellent poem, ges right to the point, and a perfect a picture to go along with it. Crossing heaven or earth to defend our families and countries. Great line. THanks.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
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thank you frank