Another Pretty Face
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Comment from JoAnna77
I really enjoyed reading this story - it drew me in immediately with its accomplished writing - and natural style. The dialogue and characters are interesting and believable, and there is a poignancy to the story - because of the tragic death of Col. Jo Barnes, yet he is the link that brings the two together.
A delightful romantic story.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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I really enjoyed reading this story - it drew me in immediately with its accomplished writing - and natural style. The dialogue and characters are interesting and believable, and there is a poignancy to the story - because of the tragic death of Col. Jo Barnes, yet he is the link that brings the two together.
A delightful romantic story.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jclark
Another good chapter with lots of feeling. I actually got butterflies in my stomach as I pictured them entering the reunion with all eyes on Sara. This chapter makes me eager to read how the rest of their night will be.
Judy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Another good chapter with lots of feeling. I actually got butterflies in my stomach as I pictured them entering the reunion with all eyes on Sara. This chapter makes me eager to read how the rest of their night will be.
Judy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from wierdgrace
I print your chapters, and ly down and read, they are truly romance novels, and I see why you are so good, smooth emotional writing, the characters are so real, and the images feel like I am right there, thank you for sharing again.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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I print your chapters, and ly down and read, they are truly romance novels, and I see why you are so good, smooth emotional writing, the characters are so real, and the images feel like I am right there, thank you for sharing again.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support. I enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love this story and this chapter is great. I am certainly wanting to see where things go from here. Everything went together perfectly. Great job.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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I love this story and this chapter is great. I am certainly wanting to see where things go from here. Everything went together perfectly. Great job.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from vandawalker
This makes me wonder about Joe. He seems to be coming on too strong and then doesn't sit with the rest of the group. I think it's too good to be true. I especially love the description of Sara. She sounds beautiful. Good writing and building of your plot line.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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This makes me wonder about Joe. He seems to be coming on too strong and then doesn't sit with the rest of the group. I think it's too good to be true. I especially love the description of Sara. She sounds beautiful. Good writing and building of your plot line.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. So far Joe's only motive is to protect Sara. He does have some flaws that we will see later.
Comment from judelesemann
This is really a great story you are weaving. I have grown to love your characters and care what you will reveal with the next chapter. Keep it going! Jude
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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This is really a great story you are weaving. I have grown to love your characters and care what you will reveal with the next chapter. Keep it going! Jude
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Connie P
Great chapter Barbara, those darn hook-n-eyes ... I always had problems with those, now I just wear things that pull over my head LOL! Joe is such a gentleman, I'll be glad when Sara gains some confidence, I feel sorry for her. Can't wait to see how the reunion proceeds.
Connie
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Great chapter Barbara, those darn hook-n-eyes ... I always had problems with those, now I just wear things that pull over my head LOL! Joe is such a gentleman, I'll be glad when Sara gains some confidence, I feel sorry for her. Can't wait to see how the reunion proceeds.
Connie
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I hate those hook-n-eyes too. I can't seem to get away from them on formal wear.
Comment from MadameSparkle
Romantic fiction is not really my thing, but I did enjoy this chapter. I liked listening to how Sara is flirting with Joe. She seems familiar and comfortable enough with him to ask him to polish her nail. Have you ever asked a man to do this for you, I wonder? It is something I would never do. In my fantasy world, I would prefer that the man thought I was born with blood red nails. The mechanics of getting them that way are way beyond a man's understanding and interest, I think. It was the only point in the chapter that felt wrong to me.
Sparkles
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Romantic fiction is not really my thing, but I did enjoy this chapter. I liked listening to how Sara is flirting with Joe. She seems familiar and comfortable enough with him to ask him to polish her nail. Have you ever asked a man to do this for you, I wonder? It is something I would never do. In my fantasy world, I would prefer that the man thought I was born with blood red nails. The mechanics of getting them that way are way beyond a man's understanding and interest, I think. It was the only point in the chapter that felt wrong to me.
Sparkles
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Once I polished my toe nails I do ask my husband to put the little flower or whatever I chose to put on my big toe for me, so I get it straight.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Good chapter, I bet the tabbies are now working up to top gear somthey can really get the scandal mill going.
Good move on the Colonel's part to wear his Mess Undress for this occassion, if the lady is in a strapless gown, his skirtless jacket and miniature medals will really get the Green Goddess of Jealousy going!
Patrick
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Hi Barbara,
Good chapter, I bet the tabbies are now working up to top gear somthey can really get the scandal mill going.
Good move on the Colonel's part to wear his Mess Undress for this occassion, if the lady is in a strapless gown, his skirtless jacket and miniature medals will really get the Green Goddess of Jealousy going!
Patrick
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Yes, I think Joe probably planned this, don't you? Thank you for your review and continued support.
Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn
I enjoyed reading this chapter and loved the tender interaction between Sarah and Joe. It is clear they share a special attractio and bond and love is developing between them. Good, believable dialogue and strong plausible characters. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed reading this chapter and loved the tender interaction between Sarah and Joe. It is clear they share a special attractio and bond and love is developing between them. Good, believable dialogue and strong plausible characters. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.