Another Pretty Face
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Comment from MizKat
Barbara - This is another wonderfully written chapter of your book. You are such a great writer and I never notice any mistakes. I'm glad you're over your third round of chemo and have survived it. Kat
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Barbara - This is another wonderfully written chapter of your book. You are such a great writer and I never notice any mistakes. I'm glad you're over your third round of chemo and have survived it. Kat
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Tellis
This chapter showed me how much Joe is emotionally involved with catching these guys and getting Cassie back. Excellent chapter.
Tellis
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This chapter showed me how much Joe is emotionally involved with catching these guys and getting Cassie back. Excellent chapter.
Tellis
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from marcellawachtel
This is a chapter that really packs a wallop! whatever she was imagining, it must have been harder for her to hear the two men discussing the possibilities. As always, well written and exciting.
glad that round three is over, and you're right here, pleasing your fans.
t
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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This is a chapter that really packs a wallop! whatever she was imagining, it must have been harder for her to hear the two men discussing the possibilities. As always, well written and exciting.
glad that round three is over, and you're right here, pleasing your fans.
t
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for you kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
You have my prayers for a swift and complete recovery. I expect you have more on your mind right now, but you'll want to read this aloud. The "music" isn't there, although the information is.(ex: slam/slammed in first paragraph.Ah, rewriting--exquisite torture.
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You have my prayers for a swift and complete recovery. I expect you have more on your mind right now, but you'll want to read this aloud. The "music" isn't there, although the information is.(ex: slam/slammed in first paragraph.Ah, rewriting--exquisite torture.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Please read my reviews and I thank you.
Comment from Glynnis W
An interesting chapter. I read the background piece and it seems like it's going to be a wild ride as your chapters move along.
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An interesting chapter. I read the background piece and it seems like it's going to be a wild ride as your chapters move along.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from 7DOSCHannah
I thought it was over all good and really just a few grammical errors here and there, but if you reread it again they are quite obvious. Good job and keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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I thought it was over all good and really just a few grammical errors here and there, but if you reread it again they are quite obvious. Good job and keep up the good work!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. Most of my reviewer have pointed out errors and they have been corrected.
Comment from The Stranger
All I can say is that this is truly a great piece of writing, fantastic rolloercoaster of emotions and well worth a mark of 6, unfortunately I have only 5 at my disposalbut I really like this..brilliant!
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All I can say is that this is truly a great piece of writing, fantastic rolloercoaster of emotions and well worth a mark of 6, unfortunately I have only 5 at my disposalbut I really like this..brilliant!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2010
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Thank for your kind review.
Comment from Lekatt
An exciting story I have been following for awhile. Intense emotions and imagery. I hope it comes out OK. I like this story it is a great write.
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An exciting story I have been following for awhile. Intense emotions and imagery. I hope it comes out OK. I like this story it is a great write.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
A well written chapter, Barbra. I found no nits and you narration flowed really well. Fine dialogue between your characters here.
Isaiah
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A well written chapter, Barbra. I found no nits and you narration flowed really well. Fine dialogue between your characters here.
Isaiah
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Babibrn
This was a great read. very detailed. great discriptions of the feelings in this piece.Joe had passionate feelings. I would be upset and hurting and pissed off if my child was missing too.great deail.
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This was a great read. very detailed. great discriptions of the feelings in this piece.Joe had passionate feelings. I would be upset and hurting and pissed off if my child was missing too.great deail.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.