Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
Thanks for writing and sharing your great work, Barbara. I too, am trying to get a novel published that concerns the situations which many women go through--including abusive relationships. Bravo on the chapter.
Isaiah
reply by the author on 31-May-2011
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Thanks for writing and sharing your great work, Barbara. I too, am trying to get a novel published that concerns the situations which many women go through--including abusive relationships. Bravo on the chapter.
Isaiah
Comment Written 31-May-2011
reply by the author on 31-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from whispersofthesoul
hiya, this was great interesting read that kept my attention although i have not read your previous chapters this seem to be a great continuation x
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hiya, this was great interesting read that kept my attention although i have not read your previous chapters this seem to be a great continuation x
Comment Written 31-May-2011
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Thank you the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - I enjoyed the post, the personal update and the author notes! Troy showed some pretty clever moves to glean the little bit of information he got. I'll of course be looking forward to the next post. Warm regards, Bill
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Hi Barbara - I enjoyed the post, the personal update and the author notes! Troy showed some pretty clever moves to glean the little bit of information he got. I'll of course be looking forward to the next post. Warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 31-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Dear Barbara, I'm so glad you made it through the school year. Your strength is so great! In the other hand this chapter is so well written, and is giving you the opportunity to help woman abused.
God bless you, you're a very special person.
:)
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Dear Barbara, I'm so glad you made it through the school year. Your strength is so great! In the other hand this chapter is so well written, and is giving you the opportunity to help woman abused.
God bless you, you're a very special person.
:)
Comment Written 31-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Carolyn 12
I love your continued story..I appreicate your wirting for abused people everywhere..I am glad you made it through the school year-fast coming to an end..God bless..
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I love your continued story..I appreicate your wirting for abused people everywhere..I am glad you made it through the school year-fast coming to an end..God bless..
Comment Written 31-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
Very clever of Troy to get subtle information out of Mr Keller. I only hope he finds Anna somewhere. I liked the pace of the chapter and the dialogue. You learnt a lot from Davidray.
Luv jada
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Very clever of Troy to get subtle information out of Mr Keller. I only hope he finds Anna somewhere. I liked the pace of the chapter and the dialogue. You learnt a lot from Davidray.
Luv jada
Comment Written 31-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from markk
Another very well written piece and great continuation of the story which keeps me reading on. well done to you for keeping working through everything. I find your writing and your life inspiring. well done.
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Another very well written piece and great continuation of the story which keeps me reading on. well done to you for keeping working through everything. I find your writing and your life inspiring. well done.
Comment Written 31-May-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from fairy77
I did a poem about abuse.Great plot,good character development,I saw no spelling errors,good action and suspense can't wait for part 5.beth
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I did a poem about abuse.Great plot,good character development,I saw no spelling errors,good action and suspense can't wait for part 5.beth
Comment Written 31-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ksherwoodrn
Nice story that kept my attention. I'll have to go back and read the first few chapters to see what happened. Good job on the writing/editing side.
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Nice story that kept my attention. I'll have to go back and read the first few chapters to see what happened. Good job on the writing/editing side.
Comment Written 30-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from onceinabluemoon
An interesting read, and no spag issues I found. Good for you, being able to work through your treatment etc. I think it's very wise of you to include all of this battered women's information here.
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An interesting read, and no spag issues I found. Good for you, being able to work through your treatment etc. I think it's very wise of you to include all of this battered women's information here.
Comment Written 30-May-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.