Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "First love"A book of Poetry & Writing
22 total reviews
Comment from pasinger
i am not sure the syllable count is right in this poem???
The artwork is lovely and so is the content.
May need to rework?
   |
i am not sure the syllable count is right in this poem???
The artwork is lovely and so is the content.
May need to rework?
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
Comment from angel123
What a beautiful Essence poem. It is short and straight to the point. You really did get to the essence of your poem First Love and your artwork choice is classic.
Angel123
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
|
What a beautiful Essence poem. It is short and straight to the point. You really did get to the essence of your poem First Love and your artwork choice is classic.
Angel123
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2011
-
thank you