Serpentine Lights
the Northern Lights22 total reviews
Comment from Carrie Carson
Serpentine pathways carry me, love this. Night owl from day one. Marvelous flow, I found this format tough to do, tricky little devils.
No idea at how to improve this, you should scoff if someone says otherwise.
Great job, best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Serpentine pathways carry me, love this. Night owl from day one. Marvelous flow, I found this format tough to do, tricky little devils.
No idea at how to improve this, you should scoff if someone says otherwise.
Great job, best of luck to you.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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They are tricky in finding the right words to fit, so I really am honored by your lovely review.Thank you So much Carrie for making my day! Smiles and Hugs, Helvi
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You're certainly welcome, I liked this very much.
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Smiles x 10! Helvi
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Back at you. Glad I made your day.
Comment from Sharrum
I thought you did an excellent job on the nonet. I love these types of poems. Your picture was well chosen. Your syllable count is correct. Good luck in the contest.
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I thought you did an excellent job on the nonet. I love these types of poems. Your picture was well chosen. Your syllable count is correct. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2012