Along the Jericho Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "A Hota Moon, Part 2 "Murder Mystery
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Comment from RazberryBullet
Interesting!--In studying the profile of serial criminals, he'd learned they often inserted themselves into police investigations in order to divert the attention of the authorities away from themselves. His pulse revved in anticipation of a killer in plain sight.
Lovely, ominous ending. What a hook!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Interesting!--In studying the profile of serial criminals, he'd learned they often inserted themselves into police investigations in order to divert the attention of the authorities away from themselves. His pulse revved in anticipation of a killer in plain sight.
Lovely, ominous ending. What a hook!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi, RazberryBullet. Thank you for your support and awesome review! Much appreciate it ... Bev
Comment from Magic Wand
Yikes, that sonny-boy is one scary dude, although his mom won't win any Mother of the Year awards. The hint of suspicion on the suspension on the priest brings forth another possible suspect. I like the way it is moving. The details bring everything in a visual manner.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Yikes, that sonny-boy is one scary dude, although his mom won't win any Mother of the Year awards. The hint of suspicion on the suspension on the priest brings forth another possible suspect. I like the way it is moving. The details bring everything in a visual manner.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much, Magic. I'm really honored by this wonderful and generous review. Thanks, also, for your words of insight and support. Many blessings, Bev
Comment from JW
"Got you a little present, Ma. Another rosary for your collection."
Hmm. Interesting statement. It definitely leaves the reader curious.
You did a great job of writing this. No obvious spags found. JW
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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"Got you a little present, Ma. Another rosary for your collection."
Hmm. Interesting statement. It definitely leaves the reader curious.
You did a great job of writing this. No obvious spags found. JW
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Thank you, Jonathon. I really appreciate your stopping by to review. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Anthony Crosbie
I love the feel of your writing. It flows really well and the characters are very realistic. Your set the scene well and I was able to visualise every part of the story.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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I love the feel of your writing. It flows really well and the characters are very realistic. Your set the scene well and I was able to visualise every part of the story.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Thank you so very much, Archie. It's always so helpful to get such specific insights. I much appreciate that! Bev
Comment from IndianaIrish
Bev, you've got to know how well-written and absorbing this book is. You focus on different aspects on the story in this chapter, keeping the interest at a high level. No errors spotted, as always. I liked the change of font with Eddie...it gives his character an extra level of ickiness. Please keep writing...I do love this book!
Karyn :>)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Bev, you've got to know how well-written and absorbing this book is. You focus on different aspects on the story in this chapter, keeping the interest at a high level. No errors spotted, as always. I liked the change of font with Eddie...it gives his character an extra level of ickiness. Please keep writing...I do love this book!
Karyn :>)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much, Karyn, for your generous review. I so appreciate your support and loyalty in following my chapters. That means so much. I wasn't sure about the font change, but I've heard from several that it's effective, so I appreciate your mentioning it. I intend to take this book in some interesting directions - ones that I think you will, particularly, appreciate. Hugs, Bev
Comment from jadapenn
Aw, no more sixes left, I'm sorry. I simply loved this chapter and can't wait for the next. I love all the action taking place. This Eddie does seem like a psychopath to me. He's going for older women because he is stuck with his own mother. Well written and very interesting. I enjoyed. luv jada
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Aw, no more sixes left, I'm sorry. I simply loved this chapter and can't wait for the next. I love all the action taking place. This Eddie does seem like a psychopath to me. He's going for older women because he is stuck with his own mother. Well written and very interesting. I enjoyed. luv jada
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi, Jada. Thank you for your virtual six and, more importantly, your words of support for the story. You are most kind! Hugs, Bev
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Bev
Wow! My kinda story.
An horrific detective yarn, beautifully crafted.
Interesting how you used italics for the killer's part - gives your story an eerie atmosphere.
I can't understand why this novel doesn't win Book of the Month.
Ron xox
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi Bev
Wow! My kinda story.
An horrific detective yarn, beautifully crafted.
Interesting how you used italics for the killer's part - gives your story an eerie atmosphere.
I can't understand why this novel doesn't win Book of the Month.
Ron xox
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much, Ron. I am really honored by your wonderful words of support. And the extra star is a trill for sure! Your support is really heart-warming, and keeps me wanting to do even better! Xxx Bev
Comment from psalmist
Oh, chilling! This one had me riveted to my seat. I love really good detective stories, and this is a great one. Wonderful suspense and hinted at questions. I like the change of font at the end, introducing the killer. That scene certainly sent chills up my spine. Well done. Look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Oh, chilling! This one had me riveted to my seat. I love really good detective stories, and this is a great one. Wonderful suspense and hinted at questions. I like the change of font at the end, introducing the killer. That scene certainly sent chills up my spine. Well done. Look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much, Linda. I'm so honored by your words of support. I'm glad you're enjoying the story - thousands of dollars spent on murder mysteries over the years may be finally paying off LOL. I wasn't sure about the font change at the end, so I'm glad to find out you thought it was effective. Your support is really appreciate, my friend. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from misscookie
Another fine chapter
as always you had my attention from the first line to the last. Here I go again playing dective I wonder is Eddie did it?
Oh well time will tell.
thank you for sharing thisinteresting chapter.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Another fine chapter
as always you had my attention from the first line to the last. Here I go again playing dective I wonder is Eddie did it?
Oh well time will tell.
thank you for sharing thisinteresting chapter.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi, misscookie. Thank you so very much for your lovely review. I'm glad my story is interesting. That means a lot! Blessings, Bev
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It was my pleasure.
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from robina1978
It keeps on being thrilling, well written and with a nice layout. The dialogues and characters seem realistic. Scary this body in bits.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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It keeps on being thrilling, well written and with a nice layout. The dialogues and characters seem realistic. Scary this body in bits.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi, Ine. Thanks so much for your great review. I really appreciate the support. Blessings, Bev