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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from babyross
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This was so touching and sweet1 I just love when children play a big part in someones life. In this case Anna's. Your charaters and descriptions seem so real, the doc entering the room and questions their truth, the indian blankets, I especially liked that, but the bringing in of her child was so heart warming. Well done!

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from jadapenn
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A good chapter. I'm sure Anna felt everyone around especially Michael. Troy is trying all he can to help her snap out of the coma. luv jada

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from N.K. Wagner
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Well, good. Now that the doctor's seen it, he can be helpful instead of wasting time doubting what everyone else tells him. Well written, Barbara. Nice pacing. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from Auroraboreal800
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It was so nice of Troy to fill Anna's room with Indians blankets. Love this hopeful chapter. Anna has a very strong will, especially where Michael is concerned.
Many blessing for you Barbara!
:)

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
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The last sentence made this a very moving chapter. It also has this reader looking forward to the next post. Good job and thank you.

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from Gooloom
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God does not depend on doctors and medicines to work His miracles. Miracles are all around us. we must not call them coincidences. They are for real. On only needs to believe. Your story is very interesting and i have been reading the prev chapters too. You have an easy uncomplicated style and you write profound truths as if they are every day occurences. Anna will be out of her coma in no time. And children who are the right arms of God perform them all the time. Excellent. Gooloom

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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Oh, I am so glad this is turning out to have a happy ending. It is a positive start to my day. Do Indian blankets grow in your pasture? That would be a lovely sight to see. Well written, and as always thanks for addressing this issue!!! Debbie

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from Jane Johnson
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Very nicely written. I like the story. Seems you have a good handle on this story. Keep writing and sharing. The artwork was superb also.

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hey there Barbara
This is such a magnificent and heartwarming story of Anna's being on the road to recovery. Now it's time for Michael and the blankets to do the rest. Nicely written
Bear

 Comment Written 22-May-2012


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Comment from CALLAHANMR
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Hi Barbara:)
This chapter seems more realistic than your last post,. This is very much the way comatose patients slowly return to normal awareness.

I am still a bit concerned that Anna is not in ICR but II checked with a neurosurgeon friend and who explained that with NRI te can determine when the swelling in the brain was reduced to a safe level, a private room is usually enough and visitors would be permitted. This takes care of my concerns from the last post.

The most important factor is that Anna cab breathe on her own and other vital sighs have stabilized.

love and Irish Hugs, I'm ready for Anna's recovery.

Roger

 Comment Written 21-May-2012


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    I had not answered your last review because I needed time to research and review my post. Thank only happens on weekends. Thank you for the kind review.