Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 72 "part one, Chapter 22"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from CheyLGwriter
I will be sure to go back and read your other post, but I related to it very well. I like the realness of this piece. From the forever judging father, to the mediating mother and the shame filled daughter were really brought to life in this piece. I look forward to getting lost in the other chapters.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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I will be sure to go back and read your other post, but I related to it very well. I like the realness of this piece. From the forever judging father, to the mediating mother and the shame filled daughter were really brought to life in this piece. I look forward to getting lost in the other chapters.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RebelRose
Boy, her parents are really something. Her father sure is plain-spoken, too. Another great chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Boy, her parents are really something. Her father sure is plain-spoken, too. Another great chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Abradon
I haven't started reading this from the beginning yet but what I have read so far I can tell that its well written and the plot doesn't stagnate. Amazing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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I haven't started reading this from the beginning yet but what I have read so far I can tell that its well written and the plot doesn't stagnate. Amazing.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
The chapter is laced with emotions of a variety of kinds. Anna's guilt, Troy's compassion, and Abner's multiple feelings bring the chapter to a semi climax. You have done a good job personifying the characters. I can, in some way as a father and grandfather, relate to the mixed emotions.
I enjoyed the read. You did an excellent job.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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The chapter is laced with emotions of a variety of kinds. Anna's guilt, Troy's compassion, and Abner's multiple feelings bring the chapter to a semi climax. You have done a good job personifying the characters. I can, in some way as a father and grandfather, relate to the mixed emotions.
I enjoyed the read. You did an excellent job.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from emmaysavage
i've been gone awhile and I missed your writing.
This chapter seems right on. I like the way you have created Abner, very stern with some reservoir of love.
I feel as if I've known Michael all his live.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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i've been gone awhile and I missed your writing.
This chapter seems right on. I like the way you have created Abner, very stern with some reservoir of love.
I feel as if I've known Michael all his live.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Anna's parents, especially her father is self-rigehious and judgmental. I understand why she married an abusive creep. Shame on her dad. Troy is luck his parents are wonderful. You did a marvelous job writing your latest chapter. Would I recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers? Heck, yes. Lovely day to you, my friend.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Barbara,
Anna's parents, especially her father is self-rigehious and judgmental. I understand why she married an abusive creep. Shame on her dad. Troy is luck his parents are wonderful. You did a marvelous job writing your latest chapter. Would I recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers? Heck, yes. Lovely day to you, my friend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Okay, I don't like the old guy! But it makes for some real tension in this chapter, barbara. Great job with building to the finale, now I guess I'll have to wait to see if Anna will stand up for herself against another kind of bully. Just my thoughts - grew up with one of them. Excellent chapter, barbara.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Okay, I don't like the old guy! But it makes for some real tension in this chapter, barbara. Great job with building to the finale, now I guess I'll have to wait to see if Anna will stand up for herself against another kind of bully. Just my thoughts - grew up with one of them. Excellent chapter, barbara.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
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You're very welcome, barbara.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Good chapter. Abner sure doesn't pull any punches! I get the impression of healing going on though, which is nice after all the turmoil.
Troy really is a sweetheart.
Nice work, Barbara.
Hugs, Av
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Good chapter. Abner sure doesn't pull any punches! I get the impression of healing going on though, which is nice after all the turmoil.
Troy really is a sweetheart.
Nice work, Barbara.
Hugs, Av
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from WLHall
Poor Anna's problems go deeper than I suspected. Although she did make mistakes, her Dad should be a little more supportive. What a character you have developed of him. A quite shocking one who will just about say what's on his mind. That's not going to help Anna get better. Great job with the dialogue, really kept the story lively.
Wanda
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Poor Anna's problems go deeper than I suspected. Although she did make mistakes, her Dad should be a little more supportive. What a character you have developed of him. A quite shocking one who will just about say what's on his mind. That's not going to help Anna get better. Great job with the dialogue, really kept the story lively.
Wanda
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
I must say Anna parents have a very bad ( negative) attitude talk about tension
I could feel it in this chapter
For goodness sake when is Anna going to start having a happy life?
Great chapter Barb.
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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I must say Anna parents have a very bad ( negative) attitude talk about tension
I could feel it in this chapter
For goodness sake when is Anna going to start having a happy life?
Great chapter Barb.
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and supprot,