Comment from irishauthorme

Excellent

Great use of alliteration, and your similes lit up this work. You captured the beach scene, I could picture everything as I read. The ironic bent of the verse seemed like a prelude for the lady that observed everything, and decided that was the right moment and place to take her own life.
Very good work, irish

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012

Hello there
Thanks for the review - very accurate assessment and I take that as encouragement.
Warm regards
phill

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Out on some borderline indeed. beautiful nature, Beautiful expressed story poem,nice flow. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Lakeport.

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012

Hello
Many thanks for the review and the encouragement.
I wish you well
cheers
phill

reply by lakeport on 17-Nov-2012

your welcome.
Could you please review one of my poems,Thank you.Lakeport.