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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about tweety's defense about his behavior. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about tweety's defense about his behavior. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork that youpost
to go with your awesome poem
You had my attention all the waty and I like how your poem movedThank you for sharing this funny cute poem.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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I love the artwork that youpost
to go with your awesome poem
You had my attention all the waty and I like how your poem movedThank you for sharing this funny cute poem.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
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Your very welcome, hope you turn your clock forward.
Comment from ronnie k
Fun, funny poem. I'm not a bird but I am as about affective in front of a chessboard lol. The poem fit with no need nor room for improvement.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Fun, funny poem. I'm not a bird but I am as about affective in front of a chessboard lol. The poem fit with no need nor room for improvement.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from teafor2
Author--Indeed a humorous slant using the universally known
iconic Tweety Bird. One would have to have been hiding un-
der a rock or some other place where the sun couldn't find them not to know about the long running feud between Sy-vester the 'cat' and Tweety the 'bird.' Use of Colloquia-lism adds to the genuineness and mirth of the terse piece.
Good luck in the contest. teafor2
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Author--Indeed a humorous slant using the universally known
iconic Tweety Bird. One would have to have been hiding un-
der a rock or some other place where the sun couldn't find them not to know about the long running feud between Sy-vester the 'cat' and Tweety the 'bird.' Use of Colloquia-lism adds to the genuineness and mirth of the terse piece.
Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from 9999pool
This is a Tweety hoot (humor) and the nitty witty birdie try to play the Checkmate game. With a puddy tat and a knight to bishop twee, did Tweety check out the chess, mate? Nope, she just checkmated you, buddy.
Great hoot and an enjoyable Gaelic perhaps?
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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This is a Tweety hoot (humor) and the nitty witty birdie try to play the Checkmate game. With a puddy tat and a knight to bishop twee, did Tweety check out the chess, mate? Nope, she just checkmated you, buddy.
Great hoot and an enjoyable Gaelic perhaps?
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
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Welcome. Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
The language of this piece is interesting because of its casual nature. The seeming nonchalance with words draws one who is eager for some fun. well done
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The language of this piece is interesting because of its casual nature. The seeming nonchalance with words draws one who is eager for some fun. well done
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from djsaxon
LOL. True to form and very funny. Can't believe you even found the appropriate pic. The best I have read so far in this prompt. Good luck - DJ
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LOL. True to form and very funny. Can't believe you even found the appropriate pic. The best I have read so far in this prompt. Good luck - DJ
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Oh now, this is just all too cute. How very clever you are who ever you are. This is a keeper. good luck in the prompt. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Oh now, this is just all too cute. How very clever you are who ever you are. This is a keeper. good luck in the prompt. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Walu Feral
Great picture, great piece! I have tried so many times to write in this style and make sense, but I can't. You can, well done and good luck in the comp. Cheers Fez.
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Great picture, great piece! I have tried so many times to write in this style and make sense, but I can't. You can, well done and good luck in the comp. Cheers Fez.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review.