Hedgerow Tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Winter Trip for Hedgerow School "Book 3 in the Hedgerow Series
47 total reviews
Comment from heyjude
Sandra, I really enjoy your stories. I know children will
just love these. The rhyming is wonderful and I love the
flow of these. The stories you write are always so sweet.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Sandra, I really enjoy your stories. I know children will
just love these. The rhyming is wonderful and I love the
flow of these. The stories you write are always so sweet.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you!! What a wonderful review, and a big thank you for giving it the 6 stars, I am so very pleased you liked it! :)
Comment from SamuelClemens
This is excellent. I could easily see this bringing joy to many kids. The rhyming is so fun, and the flow is musical. I must say you've crafted an excellent piece here. Congratulations, and thank you for sharing!
SC
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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This is excellent. I could easily see this bringing joy to many kids. The rhyming is so fun, and the flow is musical. I must say you've crafted an excellent piece here. Congratulations, and thank you for sharing!
SC
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful review, SC, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem! :) Sandra
Comment from MizKat
sandramitchell - You're very good at writing such wonderful children's poem. I really enjoyed the read and was right there with all of the cute friends and had a ball. Kat
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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sandramitchell - You're very good at writing such wonderful children's poem. I really enjoyed the read and was right there with all of the cute friends and had a ball. Kat
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you, Kat,for this lovely review. I'm so pleased you liked my story. (hope you didn't slip!) xsx Sandra
Comment from Aussie
I love your Hedgerow series; takes me back to childhood when life was easy, people loved simple things and do you remember the Little Golden Books for children? We couldn't wait for the next book to arrive on the shelf. One line that seems to bulge at the amount of words - Thick gloves for their hands and thick socks for their toes - shave it down? Maybe just gloves and socks instead of 'thick' (with respect.) Snow sticks, like that one. This is a happy edition to your book - the children will love it - I did! Cheers, K.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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I love your Hedgerow series; takes me back to childhood when life was easy, people loved simple things and do you remember the Little Golden Books for children? We couldn't wait for the next book to arrive on the shelf. One line that seems to bulge at the amount of words - Thick gloves for their hands and thick socks for their toes - shave it down? Maybe just gloves and socks instead of 'thick' (with respect.) Snow sticks, like that one. This is a happy edition to your book - the children will love it - I did! Cheers, K.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much for this amazing review, and for the 6 stars, Kay!! You are so kind. I am going to go back and look at that line, thank you for input, I like that! xsx Sandra
(what is your name? I call you Kay, but I have seen someone call you Kace!)
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Born as Kay. Second name Christine, put Kace together as a nick name. As long as you call me for dinner - Kay will do. :-D
Comment from Silverlock
Fabulous little tale, Sandra!
Loved the way you brought the penguins to life in this latest adventure.
Rhyming scheme was spot on.
I'm sure children will love it!
Don't know if you need the comma before 'goodbye' in the third line of the last verse.
Excellent read :)
Regards, Barb
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Fabulous little tale, Sandra!
Loved the way you brought the penguins to life in this latest adventure.
Rhyming scheme was spot on.
I'm sure children will love it!
Don't know if you need the comma before 'goodbye' in the third line of the last verse.
Excellent read :)
Regards, Barb
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you, again, Barb for another of your lovely reviews, and a big thank you for the 6 Stars! :) (I have removed the comma now, thank you for that!) xsx Sandra :)
Comment from amahra
I'm going to have to go back and read the first 8 chapters. I love the idea of a children's poetry book with chapters. I never thought of that. I loved the story and the cute image. I'm a big kid, I still watch animations from the 1970s like, "He Man" "Speed Racer."
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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I'm going to have to go back and read the first 8 chapters. I love the idea of a children's poetry book with chapters. I never thought of that. I loved the story and the cute image. I'm a big kid, I still watch animations from the 1970s like, "He Man" "Speed Racer."
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review, Amahra, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! :) Sandra
Comment from mizzkris20
This is a very interesting story for not only the young but the old as well. It flowed beautifully with consistent rhyme scheme. Great poem. I enjoyed it
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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This is a very interesting story for not only the young but the old as well. It flowed beautifully with consistent rhyme scheme. Great poem. I enjoyed it
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, Mizzkris, thank you so much for your lovely review! :) Sandra
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Sandra:)
Delightful as usual. Children should love the winter trip to the sea. I totally like the way you humanize your Hedgerow friends. They are perfect role models for fun and good behavior If only all human tribes could get along and integrate so well.
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Hi Sandra:)
Delightful as usual. Children should love the winter trip to the sea. I totally like the way you humanize your Hedgerow friends. They are perfect role models for fun and good behavior If only all human tribes could get along and integrate so well.
Love and Irish Hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you, Roger, for another of your wonderful reviews, I am so pleased you enjoyed this one! :) Sandra xsx
Comment from ravenblack
charming little critters. should make a kid's bed time read-aloud story time fun. in a way, reminds me a tad of "a Wind in the Willows"
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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charming little critters. should make a kid's bed time read-aloud story time fun. in a way, reminds me a tad of "a Wind in the Willows"
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so very much for your lovely review, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! :) Sandra
Comment from GarthL
What an absolute delight Sandra. It all flowed so beautifully with consistent rhyme and a great story for young and old. Your muse has returned big-time and presented a great chapter for you. It's no easy task maintaining the meter as you have done over such a long write, very very well done. Thanks for the most enjoyable read this morning. WriteOn, Garth
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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What an absolute delight Sandra. It all flowed so beautifully with consistent rhyme and a great story for young and old. Your muse has returned big-time and presented a great chapter for you. It's no easy task maintaining the meter as you have done over such a long write, very very well done. Thanks for the most enjoyable read this morning. WriteOn, Garth
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much, Garth! I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Yes, I did have a few strong words with my muse, best not be happening again! LOL xsx Sandra
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It was excellent Sandra well done, hope your keeping him/her well fed!?