Leslie Ann's Exploits
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Jonathan's dilemma"A spoiled young lady who learns the hard way
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Comment from sunnilicious
I don't understand the married in college relationship. Jon's ridiculous.... I'm not liking Leslie liking him either. Mary Ann is going to have to be extra attentive and bring out the candle light dinners to keep her man. Acrobatic sex is not the way to go.
The story is coming along well. And I'm starting to believe that I know these people. You've been thinking this stuff through. It's creative and very well written in narrative prose poetry. Enjoyable to read.
Have a good night.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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I don't understand the married in college relationship. Jon's ridiculous.... I'm not liking Leslie liking him either. Mary Ann is going to have to be extra attentive and bring out the candle light dinners to keep her man. Acrobatic sex is not the way to go.
The story is coming along well. And I'm starting to believe that I know these people. You've been thinking this stuff through. It's creative and very well written in narrative prose poetry. Enjoyable to read.
Have a good night.
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013
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Sorry about the long delay in saying thank you. I like your critical comments; they sound a bit fussy - lol. I'm delighted, however, you liked it. Dossie