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Happy Birthday Annie

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Comment from sunnilicious
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Remembrance of a loved one so special is always important. That is a sad story. Creative and very thought provoking. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
    Thank you
Comment from Matthew M.
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This is a sad story. I wouldn't still be celebrating her birthday, but then again I have never lost a daughter. It would be really sad to have that happen.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
    Sometimes ritual is the only way to get through pain.
Comment from adewpearl
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A most poignant scene that creates tension between the celebratory scene of line one and the horrible reality of line two. Brooke

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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
    Thank you, Brooke