Comment from
Cajungirl
Great job telling your story in only sixty words. Sometimes it is hard when we realize our children/grandchildren don't need us quite as much. Best of luck in the contest, you story is excellent.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
Thanks, I do appreciate the read and review.
Comment from
queenv
I would have loved to have seen more of the human element in the picture maybe the grandma. I would suggest spelling grandma correctly.
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
LOL. Pretty pathetic when in a sixty word story a writer offers up a post with an obvious spelling error. Thanks.