Miss Nadine's Wait
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Comment from misscookie
Oh my goodness that's no way to start a new life as husband and wife.
I wonder if that was as sign of what she has to look forward to.
At first I thought your poem was funny but, being a woman...... not.
thank you for sharing.
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Oh my goodness that's no way to start a new life as husband and wife.
I wonder if that was as sign of what she has to look forward to.
At first I thought your poem was funny but, being a woman...... not.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from Dklrdmcches
After reading this piece, I will have to be honest, OUTSTANDING! The flow was incredible, it made the read smooth and to the point. The humor was evident and the honesty, true. Even though there were minimal words, the story was great. Best of luck...dark lord
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After reading this piece, I will have to be honest, OUTSTANDING! The flow was incredible, it made the read smooth and to the point. The humor was evident and the honesty, true. Even though there were minimal words, the story was great. Best of luck...dark lord
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from jac_van_wyk
I found this poem very humorous. I love the red background as it indicates both the embarrassment and the anger of the situation. Good luck with the contest.
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I found this poem very humorous. I love the red background as it indicates both the embarrassment and the anger of the situation. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from Tortie Heart
Punchy and bittersweet in it's message but so like man to forget a wedding! The title and the picture are engaging and I like the layout of the words with 'But' inbetween Nadine's wait and the reason for it. A succinct poem that is quite charming.
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Punchy and bittersweet in it's message but so like man to forget a wedding! The title and the picture are engaging and I like the layout of the words with 'But' inbetween Nadine's wait and the reason for it. A succinct poem that is quite charming.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from MommaT
I like the way it was written as it made be wonder if the wedding proceeded or was this just a view of behavior to come. Thanks for the food for thought.
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I like the way it was written as it made be wonder if the wedding proceeded or was this just a view of behavior to come. Thanks for the food for thought.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from Janie King
Oh my, now that would not be fun. My sister-in-law was 30 minutes later for her wedding. She kept my brother standing at the altar 30 minutes while the girls helped her dress and do her hair. That girl will be late for her own funeral. Good job. God loves you and so do I.
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Oh my, now that would not be fun. My sister-in-law was 30 minutes later for her wedding. She kept my brother standing at the altar 30 minutes while the girls helped her dress and do her hair. That girl will be late for her own funeral. Good job. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from c_lucas
Foreshadow of Dementia. This sounds like a humorous poem, but it has underlying factors that speaks volumnes of our society. Good luck in your contest.
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Foreshadow of Dementia. This sounds like a humorous poem, but it has underlying factors that speaks volumnes of our society. Good luck in your contest.
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2014