senryu secrets
My granddaughter28 total reviews
Comment from Domino 2
Very nice tribute to your beloved granddaughter who is obviously a close friend too who keeps you young, mystery writer.
This should be a strong contender.
Good luck, Ted
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Very nice tribute to your beloved granddaughter who is obviously a close friend too who keeps you young, mystery writer.
This should be a strong contender.
Good luck, Ted
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
Comment from RGstar
Very good. A few words a, a wonderful photograph, and a whole new dimension is opened.
The secrets are the key, and so happy you have found a common ground.
Live, live and live.
Best wishes,
good luck,
RGstar
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Very good. A few words a, a wonderful photograph, and a whole new dimension is opened.
The secrets are the key, and so happy you have found a common ground.
Live, live and live.
Best wishes,
good luck,
RGstar
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
How is it that secrets have the power to do that to us? And how far do we go to keep a secret.
Good strong entry for the senryu contest.
Best of luck.
Steve
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How is it that secrets have the power to do that to us? And how far do we go to keep a secret.
Good strong entry for the senryu contest.
Best of luck.
Steve
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a great senryu for the writing prompt. It has the perfect syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest:)
~teresa~
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This is a great senryu for the writing prompt. It has the perfect syllable count. Good luck to you in the contest:)
~teresa~
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi the author,
Nice to be able to celebrate a young person who, as you say, rocks. A good tribute to her, long may she continue to to make you feel young.
Patrick
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Hi the author,
Nice to be able to celebrate a young person who, as you say, rocks. A good tribute to her, long may she continue to to make you feel young.
Patrick
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
Comment from jaydub99
Ah to live again through the contact and conversations of a loved one. Different perspectives, thoughtful pondering. I liked the whole piece, even the picture. Often they take from a piece rather that accent, but in this case it gave it some color and a human factor. Nice entry.
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Ah to live again through the contact and conversations of a loved one. Different perspectives, thoughtful pondering. I liked the whole piece, even the picture. Often they take from a piece rather that accent, but in this case it gave it some color and a human factor. Nice entry.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
Comment from Gungalo
my granddaughter rocks
she tells me things in secret
I am young again
She's certainly beautiful and if she keeps you young ... bravo!
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my granddaughter rocks
she tells me things in secret
I am young again
She's certainly beautiful and if she keeps you young ... bravo!
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
Comment from MommaT
I so understand your love and feelings of being young again. The only thing I would suggest is that you change your background color, as it is so bold that it outshines your poem. This makes it harder to read. Good job.
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I so understand your love and feelings of being young again. The only thing I would suggest is that you change your background color, as it is so bold that it outshines your poem. This makes it harder to read. Good job.
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2014