Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, carolyn, you did an excellent job writing this cute little poem about the different types of fairies. never heard of the pee pee fairy. cute picture.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Yep, that pee-pee fairy is a new one. LOL Glad you liked the poem, Carolyn

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with night/light...lost/cost...re/bed...munches/lunches...tight/might. Good description and alliteration as I can see my kids reading this piece. Good work.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Hi there, it was a fun poem to write. I hope your little one enjoys it. Thanks also for your kind comments. :-) Carolyn

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Carolyn, this is great. My granddaughter would love this. She's two-and-a-half and loves Tinker Bell.

Your poem shows how these wee-little fairies help children through there young life bringing them along the right path.

Nicely done, John

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Even though we know fairies are a figment of our imagination they are such fun to think about. Hummingbirds are the closest thing to a fairy we will see with our human eye. But the minds eye is a different thing. John, I am happy you enjoyed this one. Love, Carolyn

Comment from Jessie Denniel

Excellent

Whoa! I read your poem as if I wish fairies were true. It is right for children's poem. It is very interesting and relaxing. I like the picture too..

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thanks Jessie Denniel for such a nice review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I've been looking all about me for writing fairies since rading this, but alas I think I'm too old and cynical to see them. In the meantime, your fast moving and delightful poem informed me about the works and motivations of fairies. I knew about the tooth one, but the wee fairy is a whole new role I was not aware of. As I get older, and need to get up at night for frequent visits, I am going to remember that it's a wee fairy who's prodding me. If I open my eyes I may just see him, but if I'm not careful I might step on him. Hope not, they sound very useful.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

What a fun review, thanks so much. I will be on the look-out for a writing fairy for you. :-) Carolyn

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

Very enjoyable read with good flow, vivid imagery and positive ending: wish with all your might and a fairy will come to you if you really want them too.

Thank you for sharing and have a great week

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

I appreciated your fine comments and that you liked this poem. :- Carolyn

Comment from Akanksha Mahajan

Excellent

Very nice poem about fairies. I liked the imagination that fairies are small. The rhymes are perfect. The picture is best suitable.
GREAT Work.
Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

I am happy you liked this one, thanks for the wonderful review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I've heard of the tooth fairy before but the pee-pee fairy is a new one on me. Somehow it doesn't quite seem to fit within the traditional folklore concept of faerie. Your poem has a nice rhythmic feel to it making it sound good when read aloud and the somewhat random rhyme scheme works quite well... but Lord save me from pee pee fairies.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Yes, the pee-pee fairy was only dreamed up yesterday to assist with potty training of little tots. We will see how she works out. Thanks for the delightful review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from ProjectBluebook

Excellent

This is cute, I like the fairy picture. Reminds you of spring. And of Leprehauns and tooth fairies. KIds would like this very much. I' still a child at heart. I like the blooming colors which enhances mood. Perky and has flavor, cute as a bumble bee sucking nector. glorious day, mate! wackydo

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

And a glorious day back to you to, I so enjoyed your review, thanks so much for reading and stopping by. :-) Carolyn

reply by ProjectBluebook on 27-Feb-2014

Anytime!

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

notesandmore, this is such a fun and whimsical fantasy write that makes us all feel like children waiting on the elusive tooth fairy. I liked this line, and keeps them all cares not the cost. Great rhyme and meter. :0 GracieAnn

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014

Thanks GracieAnn for this wonderful review. I thought you might enjoy the bladder-blot... who knows where our lines come from sometimes. LOL :-) Carolyn