Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Funny poem with good sound affects and photograph to put this poetic piece over the top. A dark and taboo humor that will be an original. Don

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thanks, Don. Glad you liked this silly thing.

Comment from mstad55

Excellent

Tastes a little like chicken. It's not easy to tell a humorous story in just 3 lines. You've managed to accomplish that, and did a good job of it. The picture is excellent to capture what the imagination doesn't. Well done. (no pun intended) mstad55

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Hah, "well done", he says, and he's a fellow Ohioan at that. Thanks you mstad55, my friend. I really appreciate it!

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is clever. Reminds me of the one where a monkey is eating an apple while another looks on in anticipation. First monkey says, "There ain't gonna be no core! Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Thanks, Jeanie. Much obliged!
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Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

Good concept for a humorous haiku. I am thinking you could do a sequel about having a bone to pick with someone. Good luck in the humorous haiku contest!

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014

Hah, maybe I will, CrystalCookie999, it's a thought.

I had this thing just sittin' on the shelf for awhile, and almost entered it in the last funny 5-7-5 prompt. This time, I went ahead and did it, what the heck.

Thanks!
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