Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

LOL...!

~ Love the poem with the artwork clearly setting off your words!

~ So subtly the strychnine is given as she smiles after his raspberry torte and coffee.!

Well done!
Keep Smilin'.... Jax

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014

Thank you, Jax, for the fun review.

Comment from Lysa Schuler

Excellent

This was a really creepy poem. However, it was well written. Meter was timed well, rhyme scheme was not forced. Subject, though morbid, was fascinating. Excellent finale as well. Very good write. God bless.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014

Thank you, Lysa, for the excellent review.

reply by Lysa Schuler on 21-Apr-2014

You're welcome, and thank you for sharing. God bless.

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

That is quite horrific and also funny. It is well written, flows nicely from beginning to end, and is easy for the reader to understand.

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014

Thank you, evilynne, for the excellent review.

Comment from Millibrad

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this. I like the way you build suspense in this poem. I would say you have met the challenge with this entry. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014

Thank you, Millibrad, for the excellent review.