Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Haiku (Autumn Reverie)"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
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Comment from mfowler
This is a subtly effective vision of the autumn's beauty. There's an implied warmth and joy (reverie)in the dancing leaves, but this is balanced beautifully in the sadness (sighs) as the leaves remember life as promised in the spring and enjoyed throughout the months of summer. Excelent entry in the competition. Good Luck!
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This is a subtly effective vision of the autumn's beauty. There's an implied warmth and joy (reverie)in the dancing leaves, but this is balanced beautifully in the sadness (sighs) as the leaves remember life as promised in the spring and enjoyed throughout the months of summer. Excelent entry in the competition. Good Luck!
Comment Written 08-May-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this Ode To Autumn writing prompt entry is stunning in its simplicity and descriptive words. That colors can drip is a great description. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this Ode To Autumn writing prompt entry is stunning in its simplicity and descriptive words. That colors can drip is a great description. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 08-May-2014
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This haiku is beautifully presented with very striking artwork. I like the idea of a breath wafting the autumn leaves to the ground. My best wishes for the competition.
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This haiku is beautifully presented with very striking artwork. I like the idea of a breath wafting the autumn leaves to the ground. My best wishes for the competition.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
What a lovely ode to autumn, Mystery Poet. "Leaves float on sighs" was my favorite line. Such a wonderful, vivid image.
Very well done, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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What a lovely ode to autumn, Mystery Poet. "Leaves float on sighs" was my favorite line. Such a wonderful, vivid image.
Very well done, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-May-2014
Comment from l.raven
what a beautiful poem...so few words the show so much beauty....one thing about Autumn it is full of color...so very well written....Luff Linda xxoo
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what a beautiful poem...so few words the show so much beauty....one thing about Autumn it is full of color...so very well written....Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-May-2014
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~
This is an absolutely beautiful poem.. I love this 5-7-5..It's one of the best I've read yet~ Great Job and Good Luck with the contest.
God Bless~!
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Hello there~
This is an absolutely beautiful poem.. I love this 5-7-5..It's one of the best I've read yet~ Great Job and Good Luck with the contest.
God Bless~!
Comment Written 07-May-2014
Comment from nancyjam
This is a lovely Haiku -
I especially like the second line for its
imagery "colors drip - leaves float on sighs"
good choice of verbs.
when death is close we look back on life.
Good luck in the contest.
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This is a lovely Haiku -
I especially like the second line for its
imagery "colors drip - leaves float on sighs"
good choice of verbs.
when death is close we look back on life.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2014
Comment from donette1914
simply beautiful and stunning with just a few words of autumn, color drip, remember spring, very creative and it was a pleasure to read
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simply beautiful and stunning with just a few words of autumn, color drip, remember spring, very creative and it was a pleasure to read
Comment Written 07-May-2014
Comment from Joy Graham
I like your picture, presentation, and theme. We are praying Spring will grace us soon. Winter keeps hounding us here. Ugh! I guess I can relate in reverse of your haiku. Good imagery, I can feel the crispness of fallen leaves :) good luck to you in this contest.
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I like your picture, presentation, and theme. We are praying Spring will grace us soon. Winter keeps hounding us here. Ugh! I guess I can relate in reverse of your haiku. Good imagery, I can feel the crispness of fallen leaves :) good luck to you in this contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2014
Comment from Cariboubill
I think a good poem says more than the mere words imply. I'm in the Autumn of my life, remembering spring. That is what your poem says to me. I like these short poetry forms; so much said in few words. Your words: "reverie", "sighs" and "remembering" are all good choices.
...Bill
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I think a good poem says more than the mere words imply. I'm in the Autumn of my life, remembering spring. That is what your poem says to me. I like these short poetry forms; so much said in few words. Your words: "reverie", "sighs" and "remembering" are all good choices.
...Bill
Comment Written 07-May-2014