The Trining
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "THE PAPPERING INCIDENT, ETC."A man must discover his identity and destiny.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very different with the men bonding. I like that Doctorex is giving Klasco a lesson in English. And Klasco is trying to pull Doctorex into his trail of thinking. There is a strong connection between these two and I can't tell if it's just a friendship or if maybe their lives were intertwined on a previous plane. Great descriptions of the setting and the minute mannerisms of both men. Great job.
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reply by the author on 15-May-2014
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This was very different with the men bonding. I like that Doctorex is giving Klasco a lesson in English. And Klasco is trying to pull Doctorex into his trail of thinking. There is a strong connection between these two and I can't tell if it's just a friendship or if maybe their lives were intertwined on a previous plane. Great descriptions of the setting and the minute mannerisms of both men. Great job.
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Comment Written 15-May-2014
reply by the author on 15-May-2014
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Well, they're not gay. LOL, their relationship will be explored to a greater degree in the next several chapters. In chapter 13 there is more action and the plot actually gets furthered.
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I wasn't thinking Gay. Just connected somehow, maybe like they say, brotherhood. I wasn't thinking gay at all. LOL.