Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi Jay I like the song lyrics in this chapter to wake up the sleeping monster (what ever it is)
Plus I enjoyed picturing in my mind the scenes in the tavern.

Gert

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 23-May-2014

Thank you, Gert, for your always timely comments. I appreciate you.

reply by Gert sherwood on 23-May-2014

You are welcome Jay

Gert

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Sounds like pandemonium is fixing to break loose there as this tale continues along. The outcome could get very ugly of sorts.

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 23-May-2014

Hey, Country ranch writer! This is your first time around these parts, partner. LOL, glad to have you join in. Thanks.

Comment from Ritsal

Excellent

Sounds like Doctrex and Klasco have woken the sleeping dragon. Seems not all music soothe the savage beast. Hope our two guys have a trick or two up their sleeves. I'm looking forward to what you have up your sleeve! Enjoyable chapter.

Best wishes,
Rita



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 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 23-May-2014

Thanks, Rita, for coming back for the journey. I kinda like this chapter after the two dialogue-filled ones. I think you'll like what's up everyone's sleeve.

reply by Ritsal on 23-May-2014

I hit the jackpot with this chapter--pump,ad supreme and chuckle from the leprechaun! Cool, huh? :D

reply by the author on 23-May-2014

I love it! There is a Las Vegas element to getting so rewarded. I especially like getting two member pumps for one read. Can't help if if I'm not a purist. I likes my pumps -- I mean...

reply by Ritsal on 23-May-2014

Yeah, we're easily amused. :)

Comment from poetbear

Excellent

Great characters.
Nice flow. Like the inclusion of lyrics.
Very creative and interestting story with original ideas.
Klasco is unique and a very different character.
Nicer work!

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 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 23-May-2014

Thanks, poetbear. I'm happy you stopped by to read this chapter. I'm trying to find the happy medium between action and reflection. Please come back for the action to follow, my friend.