Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Yes it does...this is a tall order to write a poem in six words...but you conveyed a beautiful message in short order...well done
Breath of silence
Time stands still...........
God bless

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Jenny,

thank you for such a wonderful and encouraging review, it is most appreciated.

Kindest regards...

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

A lovely dedication to Missy - I do miss her
good alliterative grouping in silence/stands still
good consonance of T sounds
you create a lovely, serene mood :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Brooke,

thank you - I do miss her also.
These words were inspired by her memory.
Most appreciated.

Kindest regards...

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Beautiful picture of dawn. The words fit it perfectly. The line breaks and use of space accentuate the timeless feeling of the words.

Well written idea in six word.

Good luck and keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Dragonpoet,

thank you for this wonderful review and your well wishes... most appreciated.

Kindest regards...

reply by dragonpoet on 22-May-2014

No problem. Same to you.

dragonpoet

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

I like your six word poem very much. Not easy to produce something lovely in just six words but you have achieved this. The accompanying picture is perfect for the poem. A peaceful, silent picture. Good Luck. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hi Dorothy,

thank you for your lovely comments it is so appreciated.

Kindest regards...

Comment from playinaround

Excellent

Breath of silence... Time stands still... peaceful and serene like the picture. Very nice use of six words for this poem. Thank you for sharing!

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 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Hey Playinaround, thanks for the review and the kind comments... most appreciated... take care.

Kindest regards...

Comment from simonbagh

Excellent

Time stands still. It is always that way, but just we have divided the time into pieces to count, when you feel the standing state of time it means you know how enjoyable is the life in the absolute silence


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 Comment Written 21-May-2014

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reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thanks Simon, I appreciate the review... there's nothing greater than a quiet mind... take care.

Kindest regards...