King Sawyer
a story poem in rhyming couplets115 total reviews
Comment from Gargantuan2
I love this one.. one heck of a story and extremely amusing. I don't think you need to write books or short stories, you do much too well with this set of skills. (don't let my opinion stop you from doing so anyway) :)
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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I love this one.. one heck of a story and extremely amusing. I don't think you need to write books or short stories, you do much too well with this set of skills. (don't let my opinion stop you from doing so anyway) :)
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Gargantuan, for your generous and thoughtful response to this poem and for your encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from Christopher Lones
Dude that was awesome. It's no wonder why this is an all time best. This doesn't even have to be marked as a children book. It very easily an adult poem as well.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Dude that was awesome. It's no wonder why this is an all time best. This doesn't even have to be marked as a children book. It very easily an adult poem as well.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Christopher, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from honeytree
I loved both the art work and words very much here.
Sawyer has put in a lot of effort
I thought everything was very impressive indeed.
What fun he must have had I think he did a great job.
honey tree
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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I loved both the art work and words very much here.
Sawyer has put in a lot of effort
I thought everything was very impressive indeed.
What fun he must have had I think he did a great job.
honey tree
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Annie, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from J.Byers
Certainly, these days, the boss takes all the credit for the work of his underlings. A strong, moral poem, which could be introduced to children to promote discussion about fairness, and what fairness consists of, because, despite the simple message, there is room for discussion in your poem. King Sawyer did find the extra three men, so did he save the day, or was it the million-three who deserved the thanks? I think children would enjoy talking about this one.
Blessings,
~ J.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Certainly, these days, the boss takes all the credit for the work of his underlings. A strong, moral poem, which could be introduced to children to promote discussion about fairness, and what fairness consists of, because, despite the simple message, there is room for discussion in your poem. King Sawyer did find the extra three men, so did he save the day, or was it the million-three who deserved the thanks? I think children would enjoy talking about this one.
Blessings,
~ J.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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J, thank you so much for your very thoughtful understanding of this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
Ah, the Cute Little one sure does have fun on the beach. Can't say I blame him. Every time I step on the beach, I am like a little kid too. This is very well written and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Ah, the Cute Little one sure does have fun on the beach. Can't say I blame him. Every time I step on the beach, I am like a little kid too. This is very well written and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from marijmd
well keeping the royal tootsies warm is certainly a priority - I decree that the King made the right choice! Minions million and three make haste!
Very cute!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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well keeping the royal tootsies warm is certainly a priority - I decree that the King made the right choice! Minions million and three make haste!
Very cute!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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marijmd, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from His Grayness
Dear Brooke: another great and enjoyable work. I love the photo and the poem is totally delightful as always. This one certainly deserves a six and only my apologies are available so please forgive the poor five! Vance
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Dear Brooke: another great and enjoyable work. I love the photo and the poem is totally delightful as always. This one certainly deserves a six and only my apologies are available so please forgive the poor five! Vance
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Vance, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bill Schott
Super poem about bosses and workers. Makes me think of the light bulb joke How many privates does it take to change a light bulb? One to change it and ten NCOs to supervise. I guess it isn't really the same in any way. Great poem with a funny moral.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Super poem about bosses and workers. Makes me think of the light bulb joke How many privates does it take to change a light bulb? One to change it and ten NCOs to supervise. I guess it isn't really the same in any way. Great poem with a funny moral.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Bill, thank you so much :-) I love the joke! :-) Brooke
Comment from kintesiegel
well, you did it again and this time with many an occasion for a smile. The rhyme, thyme and flow are all perfect and the humor is wonderful. The kids that read this little story in a poem are very lucky children indeed.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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well, you did it again and this time with many an occasion for a smile. The rhyme, thyme and flow are all perfect and the humor is wonderful. The kids that read this little story in a poem are very lucky children indeed.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Bev, thank you so very much for your generous sixth star and your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Lulube
a good poemly story Brooke. I mean, the one with the thought is the king, no doubt. lol great rhyming and good imagery for this castle building and it's triumph over the storm.
lulube
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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a good poemly story Brooke. I mean, the one with the thought is the king, no doubt. lol great rhyming and good imagery for this castle building and it's triumph over the storm.
lulube
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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lulube, thank you so very much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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welcome Brooke
lulube