Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Delahay
It is better have loved and lost but the loss can be crushing sometimes. Some people hold on to the fragments of a relationship rather than admitting that it is all over. It is so hard to move on.
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It is better have loved and lost but the loss can be crushing sometimes. Some people hold on to the fragments of a relationship rather than admitting that it is all over. It is so hard to move on.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Comment from Lena Borghi
A very moving piece with a theme that is all too familiar. I've not read the preceding chapters, but will do so after finding this. Love the last two lines.
Good work!
Lena
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A very moving piece with a theme that is all too familiar. I've not read the preceding chapters, but will do so after finding this. Love the last two lines.
Good work!
Lena
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from rjuselius
getting over a relationship is always more difficult for the other partner. you may well close your heart from the forthcoming hurt and leave.
thank you for sharing this gem!
rebekka x
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getting over a relationship is always more difficult for the other partner. you may well close your heart from the forthcoming hurt and leave.
thank you for sharing this gem!
rebekka x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Rubylou
As I was reading your most wonderful poem, my heart was actually sinking.
How many games do we play when love is at stake?
Acknowledging courage to see an end of a relationship is such a substantial step.
Pretending for the benefit of others, such a mistake.
This is a great work with much feeling.
Rubylou
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As I was reading your most wonderful poem, my heart was actually sinking.
How many games do we play when love is at stake?
Acknowledging courage to see an end of a relationship is such a substantial step.
Pretending for the benefit of others, such a mistake.
This is a great work with much feeling.
Rubylou
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you for this Rubyou
Comment from Roblac
Excelling work and I really like the art that goes with the work. Very nice structure and a good flow to the poem .
All the best.
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Excelling work and I really like the art that goes with the work. Very nice structure and a good flow to the poem .
All the best.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from dennis4242
Yes a lot of us live on after a lost love. This poem was written very well. i have noticed a lot of lost love poems in looking at all poems including some of mine. Keep up the good writing.
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Yes a lot of us live on after a lost love. This poem was written very well. i have noticed a lot of lost love poems in looking at all poems including some of mine. Keep up the good writing.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you for this. Dennis
Gary
Comment from GeorgieBoy
I really the 'ready, get set, go.' theme of this poem. Actually, that is how I hear it, but I may be wrong. I also liked the line, In courage I was the first to face the truth. So many of us 'deny' for a long time before we face the truth that a relationship has expired. I think this poem was well crafted.
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I really the 'ready, get set, go.' theme of this poem. Actually, that is how I hear it, but I may be wrong. I also liked the line, In courage I was the first to face the truth. So many of us 'deny' for a long time before we face the truth that a relationship has expired. I think this poem was well crafted.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from judiverse
This is very well expressed, and you make your point very well. You certainly show the feelings that one who has been hurt in a romantic relationship. The pain comes through, but it is the moment of truth. The time has come to move on. It takes courage to deal with the recognition that it's over. judi
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This is very well expressed, and you make your point very well. You certainly show the feelings that one who has been hurt in a romantic relationship. The pain comes through, but it is the moment of truth. The time has come to move on. It takes courage to deal with the recognition that it's over. judi
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from RGstar
A scenario so frequent for many yet many are not brave enough to face the truth.
Sometimes the truth may hurt in the beginning but it soon gives way to commonsense and thereby a bridge to rebuild.
Good write.
Best wishes,
Rgstar
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A scenario so frequent for many yet many are not brave enough to face the truth.
Sometimes the truth may hurt in the beginning but it soon gives way to commonsense and thereby a bridge to rebuild.
Good write.
Best wishes,
Rgstar
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you RG
Comment from Lastamen
Love lost - - is there yet another emotion that reviles this haunting, stirring, tribal urge. You have captured the essence of this eternal struggle with this compelling piece. Well done.
Till the last amen
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Love lost - - is there yet another emotion that reviles this haunting, stirring, tribal urge. You have captured the essence of this eternal struggle with this compelling piece. Well done.
Till the last amen
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you