Believe In Love
get BLITZed!-Contest Entry35 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is an excellent, very well written blitz poem, Mikey. I almost entered this contest, and I am very glad I didn't now. I just kept from wasting 5.50 of my funny money.
Great work, and best of luck to you!
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This is an excellent, very well written blitz poem, Mikey. I almost entered this contest, and I am very glad I didn't now. I just kept from wasting 5.50 of my funny money.
Great work, and best of luck to you!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from gypsycaravan
Wow, wow, and more Wow. So many of the individual phrases are worth contemplating. A particular favorite is "rage blinds." That is such a truth. Congratulations on a job well done and best of luck in the contest.
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Wow, wow, and more Wow. So many of the individual phrases are worth contemplating. A particular favorite is "rage blinds." That is such a truth. Congratulations on a job well done and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from DragonSkulls
Wow, my friend, what an outstanding accomplishment for this contest. I rarely ever give sixes to love poems but you pulled this off fantastically and it's well worth a sixer. I think I'll just save my money rather than throw it away by entering. Maybe, we'll see how I feel after a couple drinks, lol. No, I'm not a lush, I work at night and just got home, in case you were wondering why I'd be drinking at 9:50 AM, lol. Great write, Mikey. Best of luck, friend. Now I have to go see if you're in another contest I'm in, haha. Later.
Ron
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Wow, my friend, what an outstanding accomplishment for this contest. I rarely ever give sixes to love poems but you pulled this off fantastically and it's well worth a sixer. I think I'll just save my money rather than throw it away by entering. Maybe, we'll see how I feel after a couple drinks, lol. No, I'm not a lush, I work at night and just got home, in case you were wondering why I'd be drinking at 9:50 AM, lol. Great write, Mikey. Best of luck, friend. Now I have to go see if you're in another contest I'm in, haha. Later.
Ron
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from shelley kaye
omg this was incredible! and you even got some rhyme in there too! after reading this, you're going to scare all entrants away! LOL! definitely an exceptional blitz poem! thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! :-)
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omg this was incredible! and you even got some rhyme in there too! after reading this, you're going to scare all entrants away! LOL! definitely an exceptional blitz poem! thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! :-)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Nosha17
That must have been a tough one to accomplish with all those rules. It makes you quite out of breath reading it, but that is a blitz, a flash of lightning. Great use of words and repetition, great artwork. Enjoyable read and good luck in the contest. Faye
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That must have been a tough one to accomplish with all those rules. It makes you quite out of breath reading it, but that is a blitz, a flash of lightning. Great use of words and repetition, great artwork. Enjoyable read and good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from DR DIP
I love this.
A blitz poem?! I like it, I have never heard of a blitz poem before but under the parameters as you describe in your authors notes you have done a great job
thanks for sharing and good luck in the prompt
dip
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I love this.
A blitz poem?! I like it, I have never heard of a blitz poem before but under the parameters as you describe in your authors notes you have done a great job
thanks for sharing and good luck in the prompt
dip
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
I love the words to your poem.
What you wrote is so true.
Thank you for sharing.
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You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
I love the words to your poem.
What you wrote is so true.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
you kept the theme all the way through. i tried and could not. it flowed, made sense, and was a real delight to read. thank you for sharing with us your wonderful talet at so many things.
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you kept the theme all the way through. i tried and could not. it flowed, made sense, and was a real delight to read. thank you for sharing with us your wonderful talet at so many things.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
For God's sake. Is there anything you can't do? This flows and makes sense and follows along in perfect logic. You have an appropriate title and the ending isperfect and meaningful. I have NEVER seen one of these that actually worked as fine poetry. This is amazing. So very well done. NG
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For God's sake. Is there anything you can't do? This flows and makes sense and follows along in perfect logic. You have an appropriate title and the ending isperfect and meaningful. I have NEVER seen one of these that actually worked as fine poetry. This is amazing. So very well done. NG
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Holy cow. This had to take lots of time to create. This looks challenging. This is complicated. Would be extremely easy to make an error. You read the writing prompt and executed. Laurie Kiem, his creation? This is complicated but unique. Blitz poem--i like it. How long did this baby take? I'm curious about this beauty. It grabs my attention. Looks like you mimicked the parameters perfectly. Outstanding first blitz. I speculate, some will be disqualified. A challenge! how many posts are there?
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014
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Holy cow. This had to take lots of time to create. This looks challenging. This is complicated. Would be extremely easy to make an error. You read the writing prompt and executed. Laurie Kiem, his creation? This is complicated but unique. Blitz poem--i like it. How long did this baby take? I'm curious about this beauty. It grabs my attention. Looks like you mimicked the parameters perfectly. Outstanding first blitz. I speculate, some will be disqualified. A challenge! how many posts are there?
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2014
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The title and the last two lines took time to figure out. Hahaha. The rest of it I had to keep counting to see if I reached fifty yet. NO? Okay, ten more to go. I'm the only one in it. I like my odds!!! mikey
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WHEN IS THE CONTEST DEADLINE? TWO DAYS BEFORE VOTING? THEY ARE INTIMIDATED. TAKES TOO MANY BRAIN CELLS. I SAY, YOU ARE A 100% WINNER RIGHT NOW. WONDER WHO WILL ENTER?