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Grand Operating Design

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Comment from Writingfundimension
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I really enjoyed reading your essay. I found it ironic that the acronym for Grand Operating Design is GOD. That alone is fascinating, but you've included so much more. The Corpus Collosum is so very important to the integration of the right and left brains. Since the advent of the written word, from the previous oral means of communication, has affected its natural ability. Through meditation and with specific energy techniques, it can be revitalized.

Thanks for sharing. I think you've managed to present complex thinking in a manner that is easier to absorb.

:)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
    I value your input. Thank you for the kind words and review...John
reply by Writingfundimension on 02-Oct-2014
    You're very welcome, John. :)
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks for the pleasure of another of your enlightening chapters that put us to thinking. The answers I'm sure most will agree with wholeheartedly. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
    Hopefully, this will become the introduction to a comp,ete book of essays that expand the points in more detail. Thank you for your review...John
Comment from kiwijenny
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Cogitators I found this heavy going. I am not a physicist rather an art teacher of faith in God..I think this hurt my brain..how is the human ego artificial? I would think humanity is well human
God bless

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Artificial means man-made. The ego is an illusion most people listen to when making decisions. It lies... Thanks for your input...John
reply by kiwijenny on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you John that makes perfect sense
Comment from quashdog
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I found this most informative, even though it could be made into a stronger message if for every supposition you provide some more specific cases in point and not just generalities.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    This will be expanded into a book soon. Thank you for your help...John
Comment from TKField
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Thank you professor. Yes, words to live by, although I admit a lot of this went right over my head, but I'm just a simple lad. I do believe in GUT, but I'm not sure about GAEA, or even what it's supposed to be. This is some pretty thick butter I needed a chainsaw to cut through. It may all be a bunch of cosmic bullshit couched in a confusing glop of technical and theological jargon, but I liked it. Of course I like shoving forks into light sockets and root canal...so.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Gaea is the name Bucky Fuller gave Mother Earth. Thanks for your input...John
Comment from lindalcreel
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This was very well written and I'm sure you had differing reviews. I agree with most of what you said, but as a writer of Paranormal Fantasy, I also believe in hope. Maybe some of those fairy tales are true.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    We have to understand to recognize truth. Thanks...John
reply by lindalcreel on 01-Oct-2014
    I agree!
Comment from jaeladarling
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I see where you're coming from with your thought process, and this essay is written well for those that will take the time to wrap their minds around it. Not all will agree, and I'm sure that will reflect in some of the comments received. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the words of encouragement...John
Comment from drivenbackward
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Good essay, cogitator. A little subjective for an essay, but you might have intended that. A few notes to consider:

smart phones -- smartphones

Strongly consider bolding subheads

corrals before a revolution occurs (sometimes.) -- Period outside parenthesis in this instance.

suffering will go on -- 'suffering will continue' would read better here.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thanks...Will make changes - John
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Brilliant. Everything is connected, all systems of the universe, from hydraulics to yak populations to our own bodies... all are basically the same. It's a fractal pattern (read Chaos by James Gleick), the most elegant, simple, math does it all. More beautiful than any fantasy of man's ego, wanting so desperately to be special and above the cattle they eat. But the masses who think they are so right about everything are acting just like those doomed cattle. I've never heard anyone outside of my own family and a few close friends say these things before, and it's great to see we aren't the only ones. Society is screwed up badly because most people don't like thinking... too much work. So they find a group to join and follow that herd's "thought"... which is given to them by the controlling powers. They are guided into what to believe and don't resist, because it's easier to "know the truth" without knowing a damn thing about reality.

Thanks for posting this. I will look forward to reading your reviews. LOL! :)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you very much for the kind words and review...John
Comment from onebrit
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Well this was certainly interesting, a little long as there is so much information to take in....it needs time to percolate, and think about. Separate chapters would seem to make more sense. I didn't read it all in one go as it was too much interesting stuff to consider each time. Well written.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thanks for the input...John